Thank you so much!
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Thanks so much for this and for the notes on the form, it's much appreciated! I'll clarify the fishing method. With the seasonings, the PC would know how to find fresh herbs that would make things taste nicer, but I figure they're more focused on finding roots/berries (or hunting) when they're foraging so they don't enough time and energy to do so - having the box means they have the flexibility to make their meals a lot nicer. I'll likely give some options to harvest non-essentials like that when the PC's situation is less difficult!
This delighted me so much! It's intense, creepy, and sexy all at once and has a ton of great atmosphere; the ending gave me chills. I loooove when the ending of a story recontextualises what came before and makes you realise The Implications of what you've just read, and I immediately went back to reread. It's excellently written and really sticks the landing. Congratulations!
















