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English isn't my greatest asset

Hey it's me again, are you planning on having more consistency and connections between storylines, like as amazing as a lot of storylines are, the majority of them feel like standalone stories, they just feel disconnected, and just not consistent with the current narrative, for example like how if you already completed Lori's storyline or some other similar storylines it's not mentioned anywhere again, not when Pete asks you about love interests, or Gabe, the game kinda completely forgets that ever happened and it doesn't influence any of the other storylines even if just with slight text, another example is when kiss Aerin you always say it's your first kiss even if you already kissed someone else, also if you never complete the alpha falcons quest with Evelyn and then the Elf village storyline comes along things kinda get messy with Evelyn always being at the guild even when she win the duel and she's supposed to not be, and a lot of other instances, it would be nice if the game would check if you've done certain things and that would kinda influence the dialogue or the storyline you're doing, just small things like that to add consistency between storylines and improve the narrative would be nice, but i could say that the narrative with Cynthia's and Thea's storylines were executed perfectly, and how they collide was also really nice, but then again by the very end you only confess to have slept with only Gabe even if you did so with others, you get the point, And the game has been amazing, definitely one of the most memorable games I've played in a while, i would love to see it grow more and maybe have a full release one day

Thanks

I loved Lori's storyline so much, it's definitely my favorite, but i was upset how it just ends, there's nothing more to do with lori except study after the sex scene, eventhogh i really felt like the relationship was just starting, is there anyway to add more to do with lori after her storyline? I still haven't completed the game but i doubt there's more to Lori