Helloooo ! I loved every part of it <3
I hope you're still having inspiration for this story. I know it is easy to feel pressured to work quickly but take your time. Your writing is really good ! And also, I really love the choices we are given ! Plus, it may help that I'm a huge fan of role-play and character sheet !
Can't wait for the next chapter ! (well, more seriously, I can and I will glady wait :p )
Take care and thank you so much for this glimpse of this very interesting universe !