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Very exciting story! I am already really invested in the story you have so far. The writing is very easy to read and effective, as well as comical. Maybe consider adding images to break up large text blocks. Great start!

Very well written! The setting and details are very clearly and beautifully described in your game. I wish it was less text heavy and included more pictures. Overall, great work!

well made game! I was pretty confused with the shifting perspectives, but it seems to have a lot of potential. Maybe being more clear when the perspective shifts happen can mitigate confusion.

great start! I enjoy the story, and I think more artwork and less text would benefit the game. More text options could be effective in expanding player choice. Nice work!

I love the animation! The pacing is done very well. Maybe the writing could be a bit less cryptic, but overall, good work!

very appealing aesthetic! I like that you can input your own name in the game. It is clearly well thought out with fun characters. Good work!

I enjoy the variety of choices! It would be nice if after picking each decision, the effect of that decision was more clearly shown. But other than that, good work!

The image at the beginning, though simple, really sets the scene along with the written description. I enjoy how it throws the player right into the action. I wish there was a line earlier alluding to the knife being faulty or something, but overall, great start!

great atmosphere! The blurry text and fade-ins are very effective. The closet door option led to a blank screen, but other than that, great work!

so much personality in this game! I love the background style, and the writing voice is very strong. Very fun! 

Great style with scrolling text! I agree it does get a bit repetitive, I maybe it could scroll faster? Also the humor is so great. Would love to see more visuals, but overall, great game! :)

Big fan of the “time” mechanic ! Great concept, can’t wait to see where it goes

love the humor in this game! Searching each room is a fun mechanic. Definitely consider adding images. Keep it up! :)