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There's quite a bit, but like I said, for the most part it's harmless, gets the point across, just comes across as a bit awkward. There was one instance where I'm not sure what it meant, but that's about it. It's a lot of apostraphe'd words where using the two separate words would sound more natural, or the tense being the wrong one. Not really things being spelled wrong, just not quite the right words in the right places.

I've been greatly enjoying this game. The animations are great and out of all the characters I've met so far, I've really liked all of them. My only main issue with the game really is that it seems in need of a good proofreading. There's some typos here and there, but mainly the wording is kind of awkward in a lot of places. It's mostly readable, but sometimes the phrasing is a bit... odd.

Hm. Ok. I thought it was a bug because if I went into Qarinah's demesne and *didn't* have sex with her, going back to the Nexus and hitting exit actually took me back out to Morgana's place.

Pretty new to itch.io stuff, and came across this game while just browsing around, as I had found one game that I enjoyed, seeing if I could find another.

Very glad I did so, I'm really enjoying this game. I also like how it seems to allow you to skip scenes with characters that don't really appeal to you without any kind of real negative impact on progress. Also really like to see some catering for those that have a minigirl fetish :3

Seems to be a bug; but if I go into the Nexus and go to Qarinah's demesne, have sex with her and try to leave, the "Nexus" button returns me to the Nexus, but when I click the "Stop Exploring" button it just takes me back into Qarinah's demesne.

Initially I was seeing this as a big deal because I thought I was softlocked and trapped in the Nexus, but I was just stupid and didn't think to just go to Morgana's demesne to leave...