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Student 1: Emphasize usability

Good review: The user interface design of your game is clear and concise, allowing players to easily navigate and operate the game.

Improvement areas: However, at certain screen sizes, some text and buttons may appear too small, which may affect the player's experience. Suggest optimizing the UI layout to ensure good display across various screen sizes.

Student 2: Emphasize accessibility

Good review: Your game takes into account the needs of various players, including dubbing and subtitle options, allowing all players to easily understand the dialogue and storyline in the game.

Improvement areas: However, in some scenarios, the contrast of the game may not be clear enough, which may affect the recognition of game elements by color blind players. Suggest adding contrast options so that more players can enjoy the game.

Student 3: Emphasize emotional design

Good review: Your game's emotional design is excellent! The actions and expressions of characters are full of vitality and emotion, making it easier for players to resonate and immerse themselves in the game world.

Areas for improvement: However, in some important plot twists, sound effects and background music may not be fully utilized to fully convey the emotional changes of the character. Suggest enhancing sound design to enhance the emotional expression ability of the game.

These comments aim to affirm the aspects that students have already done well and provide suggestions for improvement to enhance the user experience of the game.

Student Zhao: Emphasize usability

User experience principle: simplicity and ease of use

Good review: You have implemented a simple and user-friendly user interface in the game, allowing players to easily understand the game's operation and quickly get started.

Areas for improvement: However, the explanation of certain complex features in the game may not be clear enough, causing players to feel confused when using these features. Suggest adding more detailed tutorials or tips to help players better understand the various features in the game.

Student PAN: Emphasize accessibility

User experience principle: Inclusive

Good comment: You have taken into account the needs of various players and provided multiple access options for the game, ensuring that all players can participate in the game.

Improvement areas: However, in some scenarios, the audio prompts of the game may not be clear enough to fully guide players with hearing impairments. Suggest improving the clarity of audio prompts and considering adding other forms of prompts, such as visual prompts, to enhance game accessibility.

Student ZHANGSHAO: Emphasize emotional design

User experience principle: emotional connection

Good review: You have achieved emotional connection in the game through character design, plot development, and other aspects, allowing players to deeply immerse themselves in the emotional experience of the game.

Areas for improvement: However, in certain plot twists, the emotional expression of the game may appear somewhat mundane, failing to fully resonate with players. Suggest strengthening the design of character actions, dialogue, and sound effects to enhance the authenticity and intensity of game emotions.

These comments aim to acknowledge the efforts of students in their respective focused user experience principles and provide suggestions for improvement to further enhance the user experience of the game.

From any perspective, this work of art is impeccable, presenting the skills that a beginner should possess with simple operations, perfect

thank you

Thank you!

Thank you for your review. I will humbly accept it

Look forward to an amazing journey

I want the main character to fly

Should be kind and helpful

Defeat the bad guys, save the good guys

There is a teacher in charge

Your photos have a novel style,the button settings are very user-friendly.The plot of the story is captivating and unforgettable.The background and text complement each other, providing readers with a better experience.