Hello team,
I feel like you played it a little safe with this approach. I do think taking a traditional route is fine, as long as you are able to make it look unique. I appreciated seeing the logo process and the outcome works well, but collaterals could have been taken forward. Good job and keep it up.
Hello team,
Overall I think you could have had more fun with the design of the website and packaging, especially since your brand is 'more than ordinary' pasta. The abstract illustrations that are derived from the logo work nicely and could have been used further to develop your brand. Good job and keep it up.
Hello Bhaviti,
Self esteem vs social media is a good topic. The posters are executed nicely and communicate your message clearly. The website is informative and useful, however the design is very basic. The quiz on the website is a good idea, but it could have been developed more. Overall good job and keep it up.
Hello Hafsa,
The approach you chose is very interesting, and the subject is very applicable nowadays with all the fake news being shared on social media. The posters are intriguing, however things like spelling mistakes and typesetting compromise your work. The website layout seems a bit out of date and seems less interesting when compared to the posters. Overall, good job and keep it up.
Hello Enas,
The topic which you chose is interesting and relatable, however I do think you could have elaborated on how this application will tackle this problem. The execution is eye-catching, but it would have been nice to see other approaches (for example the mall booth could have been shaped as a pill instead of placing the main artwork on everything). Overall, good job and keep it up.
