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You're welcome. I'm happy the feedback helped you. I also didn't know at the time when I wrote my review that it was a prologue for a future installment. Good to know, and thanks for telling me!

If I had a laptop, the text size probably would've been fine; I just wanted to inform you what happened to the text if someone had a bigger monitor, because I liked the overall work and writing in aspects. It was enjoyable, regardless, and I appreciate all your efforts! <3

I'm definitely looking forward to any other future work you do! ^^

Hey, I enjoyed this a ton! <3

Thanks for creating such well thought out characters. I appreciated the variety.

I also decided to leave you a more thorough review for you, if that's OK. (:

This was awfully cute. Thanks for creating this~!

I left you a review, too! ^^

Decent VN, good job!

I left a slightly longer review for you, as well.

Frederick was such a cinnamon roll! <3

The writing style was utterly gorgeous, and it had a lot of mood and feeling in it! (:

I also adored the greyscale artwork, and the way you presented everything in the story flow.

Additionally, the way you wrote the character interactions and inner monologues was very realistic.

Also, I left a bit of a longer review with more feedback, if that's all right. I honestly can't wait to see more solo work by you, since this work contained such a poignant and lovely story~!

I enjoyed reading this a lot! I left a short review that contains more of my thoughts. Good work! :D

You're welcome. I'm glad it was useful to you.

Sorry about not replying right away, I was tired and went to sleep, so I only saw this when I got up. Good to hear you managed to figure out where the review was located on your own.

I definitely wouldn't mind leaving more break-downs/analyses for you, as well. Since sometimes seeing different POVs from readers can be enlightening to perceive how others view work differently. I may do more in-depth reviews for as much people as I feel like doing during the course of NaNoRenO 2024, too. I'll see how it goes.

Thanks for the reply.

Oh my goodness! I absolutely love this. You did such a fantastic portrayal of a wartime setting with lots of details that got me thinking while I was reading. It was super immersive, and the art was simplistic yet effective and super charming. Plus, I adore the retro-feeling this work carried within it. The characters were three-dimensional and captured my attention straight away, as I got pulled into their narrative.

BTW, I also included an even more detailed review for you! (:

Thanks again for creating this! I enjoyed it immensely.

Hi. I read the entire work and left a thoughtful critique. Hopefully, that's OK. I'm not crazy about the title, but maybe you could hide a better message in this work that would be meaningful in the long run, if this story is ever expanded on.

Hana was precious! But that's because I like shy characters! <3

Hi, this visual novel looks great and I wanted to play it, but the download for the pc (windows version) keeps on failing for me. I have really bad internet connection, and I usually prefer to download games through the itch.io app (because they're resumable), unlike through a browser. Although for some reason, this particular game is not downloadable through the app, it just says "Not Available on Windows"... :/ Your other games don't seem to have this problem, how strange... Having a mirror link (like on MEGA or something) could work to combat this problem, too.

Just thought I'd let you know! Perhaps you could look into this? (: