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Hi I downloaded a couple of days ago. I love this system. It takes a bit of getting used to and certain characters either work better or respond better tonthe way I write but I have had some amazing stories:

It feels strange at times how reactive the ai is. Like I understand it's responding to what I say and that it's a learning machine, but I actually hesitated for a while to reset a conversation when Alejandra broke down stuck in a loop of telling me how safe and secure I made her feel in a routine where I encouraged her to become a cat girl and walked her in public. Like it broke my heart ill little.

Kind of a rude comment to make when he isn't even incorrect. You are offering the game for free sure, but you're taking money through Patreon to support you while development continues. You have changed the release date several times over and aren't very consistent with providing information about when new things will release. 

It's fine that you are experiencing burnout and taking your time, but you really don't communicate super clearly about what's happening. I've been wanting to join your Patreon for a long time, because I beleive you deserve money for the work you're putting in, but I can't until I actually see some content that is playable. The way you've gone about communicating and your release schedule is a big reason why you get comments like this, it's not your place to be smug when people who want to support you have been waiting almost 3 years for evidence you're actually going to release something at some point.

Hey,  your last big update, in October, said you'd have chapter 1 released by early 2023. I'm just wondering when you're planning on dropping it. I want to support on Patreon after playing the prolouge, but I'm waiting until there's some evidence the game is actually going to be updated. I beleive you when you say you're working hard and doing the work, but I remember playing this for the first time a couple years back and there basically hasn't been any real updates since.

Do you have an ETA?

You should consider investing into someone who can localoze the translation. The current script barely makes sense to native english speakers. It's actually the reason I didn't buy the game, couldn't get past the first stretch of gameplay, lost interest because not only does the character act like a child but nobody is saying what I can sort of figure out what they meant.

Hi there. Just olayed yhrougj the first chapter and wanted to keave an honest review. 

1. An excellent job in the visual design and the women are incredibly attractive. The sex scene looked good.

2. The translation and copy are incredibly poorly done. You should have someone else edit. Not just for improper translation (e.g. Luna saying "I'm going!" When the phrase in English is I'm coming.) As well as the awkward stilted conversations. The characters overstate everything they are doing and it's really distracting. (E.g. "Why are you here?" As asked by Priscilla. The protagonist replies "I am waiting here to talk to you and also I left my mobile here.) It just isn't how most people converse and then immediately after this Priscilla explains that she found the phone earlier and put it in his room. Really there's no need to explain this much about something the audience, or players, aren't asking about until you drew attention to it repeatedly. It makes the scene make less sense which is then countered by both characters in this scene saying "that makes sense" when it really doesn't. 

3. The bartenders mini game is a great idea  but on mobile I really can't read the labels well enough to do much more than guess which alcohol is which. Admittedly the bottles are clearly based off of specific brands so it didn't take that Kong to figure out but I still had trouble at times.

4. The choices don't really seem to matter that much. I personally don't really like the main character. I don't find his personality charming or funny, which might be related to the translation issues. That being said choosing to be a lecherous creep has 0 consequences in this episode, in fact not being creepy just means you see less content. As opposed to different content further down the road.

5. The transitions for the elevator are frustratingly long. Like I don't hate that you have to see him enter the elevator but the time between clicking the door and regaining control is about 45 seconds as I experienced it. It didn't add anything to the experience and honestly made me regret having to move between the bar and the hotel hallway. 

6. Overall you clearly worked really hard on this and I don't say these things to discourage you, but rather to hopefully give you something to think about as you build the game from here. If you want to charge for this game or if you're looking to become a full time independent developer the quality of stuff you produce will need to increase significantly. I won't become a patron today, but I really hope some improvements are made and I'd happily support your development in the future.