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… Who hurt you? 😭

The game just pulls you in as a player, because Hisako is just so likable and cute… and then you throw the brick at them by not giving any positive ending option! 

But yeah. It was a very good game. It just hits you as a player, because you desperately try to replay to safe her… but then you realize that you can’t, because she herself won’t let you. 

The character dynamics were also really interesting. Grandmama seemingly not wanting the magical girls to die, after her own mom gave her life for a patient. While the mom is just keeping crucial information from us and generally seems either gaslighty or like she has an ulterior motive in the way she talks. “It’s the greatest honor to DIE for your patient.” WHY?! Why did she tell her that! Nooooooo! 😭

Which also makes it sadder, that Grandma is the first person Hisako forgets.

Good Job. You definitely managed to get the player attached to a very high degree with the overall combination of sound, writing and visuals.

(Those gore sounds… were literally bone crushing! No, no, no… we’re not making skeleton puns… mh, mh, definitely not.)

I had a lot of fun with this. Just a lot of effort going into everything. 

Only critique would be the last boss fight. It was done so quickly, even though it´s supposed to be the finale. The Soviet Rangers had a better fight (a real enjoyable one at that) than the final boss, which leaves you a bit disappointed? Like I was so hyped at the fused giant Mecha fight, I loved figuring out that I can extinguish the fire by rolling in the snow, but the last fight, the thing the player will leave the game with... didn´t have such a highlight. So maybe, next time plan the last fight at the beginning to have a goal to work towards? Or keep in mind to make it the highlight instead of the fights in the middle. 

She could have caused a small earthquake with her purr or turned into a giant cat chasing you. Maybe lunge attacks or a second phase where you have to avoid stuff during her ult, because you can´t stop it and can´t attack her. Just to make her more threatening.

 But you could just shoot her and she was dead... She was kinda the weakest boss.

I LOVED the soundtrack! The Metal OST is currently playing on repeat, it´s awesome!

And I really enjoyed how the game was not taking itself seriously. Just a fun time and vibes in a parody of... so much. XD

Heeeeey, you actually kept the middle finger! It was just the first association with the design!

Nah, but this is very, very good for your first Jam! The animations are awesome! Colors go BOOM!

We played it together, you Otto.  XD

The writing was so engaging and the art was really expressive. The entire thing is just  so well made in general!

Oh! And I love the good ending with Temperance. Did not expect it at all! I´d be hyped if you ever planned to do a longer version of the game or a second part or smth! Would rush in with the pom poms and a fanart! :3 

Man... there is just so much love in those characters, where they all have their own distinct personalities.

Only criticism would be some typos and spelling mistakes in the Temperence route. And that the other girls didn´t also have more ending variations. But that just made Temperence my favorite... ok tbh she would also be otherwise with the drinking buddy scene.