I really appreciate your use of art and symbols to make the whole sheet more interesting but there are several other design elements that detract from the beauty of the piece. Primarily I am talking about the large gaps within paragraphs which makes them more square but otherwise gives a sense of clutter even though there really is not that much on a page. I enjoy your inspiration, execution of core mechanics and explaining how those mechanics work but the awkwardness makes it less interesting for me. Still, the three folding piece and atmosphere is a really good base. I hope to see more from you :)
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One Page RPG of Science Fiction Posthuman and Transhuman Adventure with a Credit Resolution System