The grammar was a very minor thing and is honestly overshadowed by how everything comes together.
Seriously, I can't wait to see what you're going to come out with next! <3
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Okay, I understood the vibes of this when I went into playing but it still felt like going in blind. Which only added to things. What a fantastic experience and there was a reveal that recontexualized (for me) the whole alienation and disassociation themes. I'm absolutely going to be replaying this to try to get the other 2 endings because I have no idea which one I got or if it was good/bad/secret. I can't wait to see what's next from you because you did a phenomenal job of having both art and writing support and reinforce each other.
My only critique would be to have someone proof read your prose. There were a few instances where I couldn't tell if a relative was male or female.
Great game, great job, can't wait to play more from you! <3