I thought the narration was charming and I really like the concept! I could totally see this idea be expanded on and having even more elaborate funny scenarios/disasters to play through if you decide to keep working on it. I wish there was at least one puzzle where the player has to completely figure out what to do on their own instead of receiving instruction, but it sounds like you were planning that eventually anyway. Nice job!
My fav quote: "Good work. Getting that kitchen sink on the counter was critical to this mission's success."
