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Loved the demo so far ^_^

But, what I wanted to say is that I found a few errors on turn 185:

Error: macro <<If>> does not exist

Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>

Error: macro <<If>> does not exist

Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>

I know coding can be a pain 😞

(First comment!! Yipee)

Anyways... I wanted to tell you that in the sections where you can choose the mc's facial hair, eye colour, height and skin tone, I think there must have been a coding error since the raw code (?) can be seen, but the rest of the passage is fine! :3

I wouldn't think Eirik is an RO, mainly because he's the PC's (first) cousin, so it'd be incest and the author most likely doesn't condone it

Potato + Egg

Love love love the rewrite. I love how we got to see more of Roxanne and Isma. And the situation when Isma and the other person come in seems a bit more plausible to me.

Though, I have one main complaint in which you don't always start a new paragraph when a new person is speaking. Just makes it a bit confusing seeing two (or more) people speaking in the same paragraph.

And another very minor one is the amount of '...' I see. I just think there's a bit too many, but that's just my personal preference.

I hope this is not abandoned 😞

Edit: >:(

I love this so much. But I do wonder if this is still being worked on because in the description it says chapter 2: sovereign route (which is the route I'm going down) was supposed to be released around September. I don't use tumblr so I don't know if the creator mentioned anything there, so any information would be helpful. I also hope I don't come across as pressuring, because I don't want to be. 

I know I made a comment a bit ago, but obviously a lot of people (and me) thought this IF is a masterpiece (which it is.). I also want to thank you for audio example for Irridecci. And I also want to thank Isabela Zaneti for the ilustrations for the characters. I am very bad at visualising just from text, so I always appreciate character drawings (it helps a lot) and in this case, audio example.

I love love love this story. 

But I am stuck at a point, more specifically when I'm trying to find out what Tatianna did to Fenrir. When I try to talk to Aria about it, the page comes up with this: Error: the passage "Chapter4Page15Choice5" does not exist.

I don't know if I'm the only one who curious about this, but I would also find it helpful if there were examples of what an Iredecci voice sounds like

Masterpiece.

Salami + Flour + Butter + Cheese

I actually love this. But I one thing I am picky on is: New person speaking = new paragraph. Along with a few (constant) spelling mistakes. I also think there should be a character customisation in the future. But apart from that, this story has such great potential!

don't worry, you're not the only one

I'm also curious what other peoples mc's are like...

I'll go first:

Name: Aza De Vesphire

Pronouns: He/Him

Appearance: hip-length, wavy, deep-pink hair | ivory skin | crimson eyes (obvi)

Personality: Passive, cautious, charming, expressive, honest, kind, outgoing, peaceful

Edit: I'm also romancing Hunter (you can include your romance option if you want to)

I really hope Clarence and Alistair (maybe Catalina too) are alive😭, I cannot be seen as delulu.

Also, I LOVE HUNTER (so sad I got friend zoned waaaaa)

I also have another delulu theory. What if we (the mc), Helios, Soarine and the prince/princess fro the other kingdom, all kinda become the gods yk. And we got suuuuuuuuuppppppperrrrrrrrrrr op powers. It would be crazy if that did happen...

I think there might be a bug, when I chose to be from the Verdant Plains (Farmers and healers), it said I came from the Crimson Citadel. All the others work fine though (even the Crimson Citadel)

Theory: Alistair, Catalina and the other brother (forgot his name) are not dead and they are a part of a secret rebellion against Luceris or maybe they were kidnapped by the Royal kidnapper group (I'm terrible at remembering some stuff 😭) 

I know my theory might be really unoriginal but I like share my thoughts and opinions so please no hate or bully comments 😡

👀Also when is chapter 5 (and more) coming out?👀

I want wanted some too 😭

Try adding butter!

Food monster. Salami + Flour + Butter + Cheese

Charcuterie board: Salami + Cheese

Fried banana: just banana

Salami + Cheese

Bread + Milk + Egg + Butter (You can also add Banana or Blueberry)

Flowery mess: The flower pot in the top right corner + One of the other food items (Very sorry for the misinformation!)

Food monster: Salami + Flour + Butter + Cheese

Eggs + Butter + Flour + Cheese

Butter

Eggs + Butter + Flour + Cheese

If anyone is stuck on a recipe, I will be happy to help! :3

Banana + Blueberry

You have to add either bananas or Blueberries, there is no normal healthy pancake

Charcuterie Board= Salami + Cheese

Healthy Banana/Blueberry Pancakes= Egg + Butter + Oats + Milk + Banana/Blueberry

(P.S., If you don't put Banana or Blueberry in to make Healthy Pancakes (I think) you'll just get scary porridge)

Painting: All the chalk

Healthy Blueberry Pancakes: Egg + Butter + Oats + Milk + Blueberry

Quiche: Egg + Butter + Flour + Cheese

Fried Banana: Banana + Butter (I need to start reading properly!)

Charcuterie board: Salami + Cheese

Bread + Milk + Egg + Butter (can also add Blueberry or Banana)

Healthy Banana Pancake = egg + butter + oat + milk + banana

Healthy Blueberry Pancake = egg + butter + oat + milk + Blueberry

YOU HAVE TO ADD BANANA OR BLUEBERRY OTHERWISE YOU WILL GET SCARY PORRIDGE!!!!!

Egg + Butter + Flour + cheese

It should be Banana & Bread

Ghee= Butter (sorry)

Fried banana= Banana + Butter