Real talk man, author to author here, (dare I call myself an author after experiencing this profoundly stunning WIP?!?! Or merely a peon who writes for fun?!) The way you set everything up is just perfect, the pacing, the dialogue, and the character reactions are just so on point. I cannot help but be in awe at your work. Originally I thought this was going to be some normal sex game, but after playing through it... My god... I cannot describe just how great it is, and sure people will complain about the mechanic of 'develop relations or say some funny one liner', but you have to hand it to Carabdis that they've made a masterpiece. And it isn't even finished yet! You have my respect, good sir, from one author to another.
(And you'll have my wages once I score a full time job, whether you like it or not! Because we need more of this, and God knows that if you ever stopped development because of insufficient funds then we'd all weep and a great abyss would open up across the Earth; denoting that a talented individual such as you was held back by the constraints of society and money!)
Enough dick sucking from me... Time to go and see what all the fuss is with OIAL.
With mad respect,
Genzu