I have a complaint about the minigames, it's that the beats of the songs feel off sync and that throws me off, any plan to fix that? Also the ring doubler doesn't seem to be working.
I had an idea. Why not add a domination gameplay mechanic where the more strength you have, the better chance you have at dominating an enemy whenever you use specific lewd skills?
You and your group are doing a fantastic job with this game so far, I am really invested in the story instead of the adult content which is no small achievement. A lot of the characters are interesting to be with and I sympathize with most of them due to the conflict except for a few; notably of which during a "certain" event in the game, I felt a cold rage run through me and wanted one character to pay. That's how much potential that you have as a storyteller. However, after playing through on hard mode, there are a few problems that need to be worked out.
Cons:
Even if you check every spot in the game, the areas where there are hidden items are often NOT noticeable even to the trained eye and appear as a non-interactable object. Having subtle visual clues should rectify this issue.
The Health HUD tends to block the upper left corner of the screen.
It feels like the overlays you use darken the game too much, this makes sparkles (interactable objects) hard to notice and certain enemies to get the jump on you.
Mining resources feel tedious due to being only able to do it twice per day. Same with accruing gold for certain missions.
The hard mode as it is, is currently unfair and tedious. The enemies feel tanky and some even feel like they keep dodging attacks, not to mention that they hit harder than the MC even when he wears good armor.
Not much in the way of offensive-type magic.
There's no End of Demo message.
Glitches:
If you enter a character that has a CG while in sprint mode, neither the MC or the major character's CG will properly show up, only their expressions will.
Invisible walls where there shouldn't be and and some walls can be walked upon.
Some parts of a mission are still white even though you completed those requirements
Fix the Swamp West Boat!
Even if you have a high enough relationship with Lydia, you still can't bathe with her.
Lala and Mr. Grimm's children aren't visible anywhere if they are born.
Some CGs remain on the screen.
Some sounds still play when they shouldn't.
When you use a camping kit on the world map, time still passes.
Ideas:
Agnes' Maps:
An icon to let the player know that they got everything in a map, like a checkmark.
Alexia:
A quest to patch things up with Alexia and Kaali.
The Arbor:
A Donation box to renovate the church after Kaylee moves in.
Art Theft Quest:
Any offers you make to the Art Vendor should be greyed out.
Baako:
Romance options and the choice to have sex with her if you defeat her in training with a high enough relationship lvl.
Bandit Camp:
You should be able to enter the bandit camp regardless of choices.
Beasts and Humans:
The Beast people should have some more questionable actions while the humans should have slightly more moral actions to balance each other out and have more drama to the story.
Capital:
There should be signs in the Nobles' district that tell you which house belongs to who.
The Golden Skirt sidequest:
12 seconds to escape instead of 10.
The Hidden Village:
Needs to be a bit bigger with a few more Beast people.
A side quest where you have to bury the slain Beast people if you side with them.
A quest where you have to put out the fires before they could spread to Blackforest Village.
Lady Cecille:
Have the MC hint the player that they should be able to speak to Ms. Cecille about an audience with the Queen once the Rel. Lvl. is high enough.
Lala:
There should be a rumor about her location that you can learn from Nancy.
Liz:
The ability to renovate her house, regardless of the path you choose.
Lydia:
Have the option to renovate her hideout as a way to gain trust and attract more rescued Beast people from Slaver caravans.
A CG scene where if your rel. level is high enough, you can have a threesome with Kaali and Lydia.
The option to join in when she is busy doing her "business". (This restores 300 health points!)
Mountana:
A taskboard and a donation box.
Nassiah:
More content involving her and her relations with the Oakwood townsfolk.
Nixxie:
More romancing options and a proposal choice.
An option for her to stay at the manor if you completed Beauty and the Beast.
If you freed the Beast People in the Orchard, Nixxie will move there if you tell her.
Orchard:
The option to assist Cain into infiltrating the Baron's Manor at night while avoiding the guards, it's harder but rewards more exp.
Have any Beast people you rescue from slavers show up at your Orchard.
A renovation option to improve the living conditions of the workers.
A choice to add a sex dungeon for pleasing certain characters.
BIG Ideas:
A type of fertility potion that allows the MC to sire a pure Beast person instead of a Cross Breed.
The choice to lay siege to the Virgin Queen's Castle or the Beast King's Palace.
Threesomes with party members joining in.
Expanding your manor to include more rooms for your wife/wives.
More books detailing the lore of Cataclyzm.
Questions:
How many Hearts of Darkness will there be in the final version?
Will you eventually replace the AI generated sprites for certain enemies?
Will there be more voiced narration like in the intro?
How many endings will there be?
Will you update the walkthrough?
This may sound dumb as shit, but will there be subtle moments of some characters doing number 2 without showing anything graphic?
Anytime! By the way, you can just add a toggable "privacy please" sign to the outhouse so that the player won't see the MC or others doing their business. It's turned on by default.
2: Will there be other party members with their own storylines and interactions?
3: Will having too much Lust, Corruption, or Submission lock you out of other choices?
4: How many fetishes will there be?
Suggestions:
1: I know you are focused on "Kay" as a playable character and have Fox and "Fox's Love" as a major NPC and gameplay mechanic, but why not instead have Fox as an optional party member and rename the "Fox's Love" stat to just "Love" and have it act as a counterbalance to either the "Lust" or "Corruption" mechanics?
2: Have additional costumes and images based on what you are wearing, or rather what you aren't wearing.
3: The Lust, Love, Corruption, and Submission stats should affect combat and how you and your party fight.
4: A "Reputation" mechanic where your actions and choices determine how NPCs react to "Kay" and co.
The VIP Room's restroom, the VIP Room's shelves, the top of the main lobby, and the shop when you are in bunny uniform. Those are the ones I've noticed, and I have a few questions and suggestions.
P. S: Make sure not to give this game TOO much attention. Otherwise the N ninjas will come down HARD.
Looks interesting so far, though you may want to add the Furry and RPG Maker MV tags to get more attention. Not to mention fixing the maps, I found a few sections where I could walk through the walls.
"Can we have a longer daytime/nighttime please? Just having five minutes for everything feels too quick, it felt like I was speedrunning the entire game.
Also, the bed monster attacks too fast and all that. It would be good if a day cycle lasts 20 minutes. (addendum. try a 10 minute day cycle instead, C. Pickle.)
Also add some enemies that only hamper the player instead of harming them, not to mention a health mechanic that determines how many times you get knocked down before you lose.
An option to fuck the plants. Yields interesting dialogue and unique events along with an ending: 7
Weight gain/ body expansion option. Eating the "special crop" you grow grows certain parts of your body to an extent, but eating too much in a day will cause you to gain weight. You can only get rid of the weight by running, farm work, or using an outhouse: 6
Herm MC option. Unlocked after beating the game: 5
Farm/Hut customization and upgrades: 4
Masturbation option. Cumming on certain plants could yield a chance for a crossbreed: 3
Replaying sex scenes. Purchasing a video camera unlocks a gallery: 3
Upgrades for your character such as a backpack or stamina boosts: 3
A set of kink disable options. Not everyone will tickle their pickle at the fetishes included in this game: 2
A story mode for the MC to have a purpose and the player to have a bigger goal other than repairing the pickup truck: 2
An outhouse for your character or others to relieve themselves, this is also a good source for making fertilizer: 2
More character interaction: 2
Option to change or have sex with the vendor: 2
Optimization: 2
Ideas:
1. The spray "fertilizer" should now be called growth spray, where it makes plants grow faster at the cost of damaging the soil. Healing soil patches require rain or fertilizer.
2. More areas like a cave, a river, or a deeper part of the forest.
3. A tie-in txt. story or short prequel for Haunted Acre.
4. A bestiary for the characters, plants, and creatures.
5. In-game cutscenes for certain events.
6. Better lighting for day and night, I saw some weird effects when it was nighttime.
I'm just throwing out a few ideas that you could use in the future
1: How about adding a masturbation option? It could be useful for making certain plants grow other than being an excuse to have your character whack it or smack it.
2: Adding a purchasable outhouse for making fertilizer, applying fertilizer to the crops you grow could yield a bigger payout or replenishing soil patches.
3: Customizing your hut with purchasable furniture to access special sex scenes.
4: Ability to buy a found-footage style video camera for replaying sex scenes.
I would like it if you could improve and upgrade your room, keep some of the items you find for yourself, and have a camera to take photos of the girls out and about or interacting with each other or the club's environment!
You must find a key in Mixy's Cave and fix all the fuse boxes. Then you must CAREFULLY head back to the exit but don't leave just yet. A door will have appeared by the counter because all four fuseboxes are now working. Use the red key (press the use item button) and then enter the door.
