hi, i played your game for a bit and i want to like it i really do, but ive played eturnum before and manny characters in the first hour ressemble the characters in eternum even if erlyer charachteristics are sown then in eternum , manny cliches are lining up with eturnum or characters that you used. i know a story is hard to tell and write/designe. i myself am working on one and there are probbably games out there that resamble my style writing/story(even if i havent found anny right now) but there are because everythis is written already kinda. but you know when i read and see what you´ve done witch is impressive i just see eternum 50% of the time i dont think its bad but it kida feels wierd to play and somehow know whats going to happen. In the first scene with the mom i hoped that there were no direkt intentions from her but a few clicks along i thought fuXX why. because the disgne is awsome but it feels like i know the story already
but keep up its a 0.2 and everything can happen and you can change things like ive read and just do your game because its your thought prosses and your time to create something you love, and im just a player that maybe thinks a bit too much . Good luck and have fun creating your own game