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Ciao, I’ll share my thoughts:

level 1 is expected to be easier than level 2 in which difficulty spikes sharply.

I played it with a system of mine with 4 characters roughly equivalent to lvl1 for a generic osr and they managed to explore all the complex in 2 sessions, the group was badly mangled and one of them died but they were very clever and cautious, and avoided most of the dangerous enemies (but also most of the treasures).

I would say maybe lvl1-4 is good, but much is dependant on the number of creatures roller on the random encounters.

Also the amount of treasure is around 1k gp, which for a deluxe version I considered boosting it to around 1.5k   

Hope I helped!

yeah, now that you made me notice I could have placed the numbers inside the rooms and made it clearer (i think arrows would have caused additional clutter).

What do you mean with the limited senses? The sluggoth not being able to see?

Thanks for the review by the way and be sure to tell me how it plays out if you do try it :)

Ciao! yes, I made it with a short campaign in mind even if it’s a lightweight game :)

Many thanks! I had to compromise between the information density and the font size and I recognise the font was left a bit on the small side (especially the italic) … I hope it’s not impacting legibility too much.

I’ll surely provide the unlabelled maps in the download files at the first occasion! 

thanks, very kind! Took a load of time to make the cover (in powerpoint!)

Segnalo errore nella scheda del personaggio (Destrezza al posto di Mente) e la mancanza della spiegazione di Raggi Separati per i Trucchetti di danno. Segnalo anche le sagome grigie intorno ai riquadri verdi di approfondimento.

Many thanks! ;)

Hey! I liked very much your game and decided to reformat it as an A5 document, reworked the presentation and changed the rules (trying to keep the same structure and spirit). I hope to not have been too rough with the work and hope you like it!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EfNFo6axbhD9XTE2x4fkltMCWZH1FLl0/view?usp=shari...

This version is untested, so i might be unaware of a better balancing, Aether economy or structural limits.