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Soo good, the ending, the story, the plot. Kiss the chef

Okay so spoiler warning now, and please read the fvn first, I warn you :D

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So bla bla bla, Alex and loken are still together and are now adjusting to the couple life while also doing their duties. The chief going to combine the two clan, Niro and tashi are in a still a question relationships. Bla bla 

Okay I won't skip this, byte................ In my impression, we do loss byte, the demon byte, and what's left is the ai, the thing Alex father made and feed to the whisper. Well that my impression why byte now forget, and having trouble now remembering. Or it's because of the algorithm as we did see the effects, idk

Now purely theory, our alex have transcend, yes what glitch and the othe demon wanted, he have ascended, well in what we can see, or he can now fully use the power. Glitch is still being torture, head cannon (100℅ deserve). And now seems like Alex would can potentially be a villain, just assume really from the ending. But I digress

I really like how there no real hero at all, just people win and loss in the end. 

I'm just scared of downloading this, either I'm gonna be sad about the end, or the fact the fvn is already done, idk I'm just scared at downloading this XD

Oh my god I haven't yet catch up with this please don't end please 

(Still one of the best fvn I ever read, make me want to steal ML from MC. I can treat that dog, both literal and sexual :] )

I'm actually crying now, my little bull I'm coming for you (both inside and yours ;D) , and I'm your coming home with me :D

Goodness lord I almost have a heart attack. Yes is sad the artist is leaving but, got damn the title. Anyhow, good luck Nanof, and thank you for your contribution and thank you for all the time you may have spend making this master piece

Your such a teaser 😏😏😏

Well it good I guess( not my cup of tea but those not mean I hate it. It just not click to me much. I think it from the art style, again I don't hate it okay? )

It was such a good fvn. Hope for more hyponova 💕💕

Huh, never expected that I found a goldmine here, all are good, it suprise qualty even thou this is a demo and that it Sad that you might not continue this. But at the same time excited to what you be coocking up

God!! What I gem I found, like you active way to many thing in me that, like I wanna bite every each of the character?! ( I don't know why as well😅 ) and I'm very much glad that your continuing the story ( if you haven't I might have a strock right here right now XD) great story and very well made in the plot and character, continue the great work <3

A very generic yet well written slice of life, character are well written thou the attitudes of mc is kinda a generic trait right now( not saying it bad at all, it fit well for the mc), music very well fit the theme. Thou I'm not gonna lie the art style so cute yet it give hot.......... hot atmosphere. Overall 8.9/10, again this can change when the fvn is complete.

A recommend to people who like cute and horny in one package ;)

Welp base on the comment alone tell me it gonna be a blast but....... mostly really my mental health might not be able to handle what come to me if I may play/read it. But doesn't mean I won't be tackling it, just need the right time to get to it. 

but hey if I tackle it today with my current health and I fell in the spiral pit of hell. I think kalemsight might be able to bring me back from the pit it self XD ( I'm sorry but it to hilarious not to mention it when I stumble upon it XD ) 

keep up the good work and always priorities your health if it getting worse. Have a nice long rest for this master piece I might tackled in the future💕

Early ŕating:

won't denied I become curious and hook on the story, it mysterious and quite  Aesthetic in the eye( and yes I'm wanna bite there belly :3). Music and the artstyle compliment each other. Overall 9.5/10 for me, reason for the .5 is that is still early on the story to really define the rating on it. Maybe when is complete that it change

Anyhow great story would recommend anyone for it. Keep up the good work 👏 

Early rating:

Context : so the reason I decided to read this because of the April fool :) And you know what I wasn't disappointed, thou the art style need improvement ( sorry :( ), but it does add the unique of the story. Story wise I'm very hooked now and very much waiting patiencently for the next update of it. 

overall: great story, art style need some refinement. 8.9/10

Great job, hope to see what in store for us in the next build. :3

so at the end of the build there be a wolf boss fight ( presume it the mountain god ) is that the end of the build or is there more to it? I'm just confuse if I complete the latest build l?

oh and how to unlock the the first ( the blue one that i outline) and the last one( the white outline). (i just took this from someone)

All I can say to this update, that is you guy hit it to the roof. It was great and had me falling for the minotaur all over again💕. But the only thing, I think I will comply is the text where some might not make sense when reading( like the word alway become " Allway " or some like " Histhis" ) but that all I notice really ( if you guy have time to fix it, this will greatly bring me smile😄. If you guy have time. You guy deserve the rest :3). In all it a great chapter that might make me play it, like over 10 time before I contracted a stroke from all the love of mine, too asterion 😍😍😍💕.

Well I still hate him and would like to kill him but meh he's cute when he wears that sweater.

Review in the way the game design (not the story,I'm still playing it)

It quite good,thou may my only complain is how the font colour in the main menu. It a great colour for it that blend well to the design, but I recommend to somewhat make the outline of the font more visible to the eye and pleasant because for the few min of just opening I was greeted with blinding screen for a sec. That all 

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It has potential to be a great vn, keep up the good work👍

Your welcome, and I'll say it here.

The VN has potential, keep up the good work :)

Wanna let you know that the android version has some problem.

Mainly the text box, where the text is lower that usual. So in some long text it just crop down to the point of unreadable. Can you fix it or is there a way to fix it?

OoO.... Wow this actually my first time seeing a animation in a VN. This has potential to be great, not one of the greatest but a great VN, keep up the good work👍

I do have a question(this might contain the ending, well the name of the ending really.). What the canon ending of this, is it the bittersweet ending or the Mera ending ( the Mera ending name is base on what the other takes form of( there is another name for it but it is in Google or reddit), and and the bittersweet ending name is taken in reddit you can search it on Google and the reason, personally my canon ending is the Mera ending, thou hope is the canon one. You can just say it ending A and B)

After finishing this a couple of weeks ago, im still sad but in a good way and I'm waiting for more. This is well not really spoiling anything but the ending so Spoiler ahead.

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Thou I'm still suspicious about The Parent. Because one I'll point out is that THEY GOOD DAMN IT CONTROL THE MC WHEN HE WAS GIVING THE GOD DAMN WINE EVEN IF HE KNEW NOT TO GIVE IT (like literally they just invade the mc body twice now in the wine incident and the where amicus try a way to bring the mc to life). second but mostly just a theory is that the parent are the cause of the death of the emperor and the one who cause Cato to go in madness ( just a theory in the part of Cato and the emperor but they still might be one of the causes, and again this is just a theory so you can take it as a pinch of salt), that all I can really say and I know there are more point I can make in the parent but I forgo ( mostly from all my sad day that my mind just restrictions my memory of it, untill I got better) still I'm on to you 🧐 parent.

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This truly a good one, maybe my favorite. Thou I know there are better one, but that not the point of this. It does not has to be a good one and the point is to let you get hook on it and entertainment you, make you happy, sad, disgust, mad, fear, pleasure, and etc. And it hook me right away and I'm excited to see the completed story of this( yes I'm just gonna wait till the entire story line is completed). But if the parent ever dare to take back there word about the happy ending of amicus and mc, I will make sure they will regret it 😀🔪. Jk 🤣 ( still amazing and I enjoy reading or playing through it. Good job and keep doing what you love creator 🥰)