Its a interesting concept and i like the feel it gives of an rpg, and the way u have written so far, however as is only the prologue, i cant give much more of an opinion than this;
Vincent of Cresthlot
Intelligence: 21
Charisma: 17
Strength: 38
Dexterity: 23
Charming: 55 Appalling: 45
Comedian: 60 Soldier: 40
Impulsive: 40 Calculated: 60
Did you mercilessly beat Alister?: No, why the hell would anyone do that? Barrowed money from Alister: True Did you buy the potentially magical book?: Yes What armor did you get?: Reinforced leather Did you buy the combat knife?: Yes Did you buy the bow?: No Did you buy the shield?: No
I would have liked a to customize the stats, but also feel its fine as is based on the choices so far