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Wtf is up with all the weird Gen Z lingo that pops up suddenly, like an hour into the game? Feels like the game got a completely new writer

AVN's are going to shit. WAY too many cuck Devs in the past 1-2 years. I'm starting to understand why modern Women hate Men so much, a bunch of cucks with no self respect out there

Ahh that makes sense, I was wondering if you simply were limited with character design in the beginning. I will admit Lydia was the ONE main LI I found attractive, and yeah Sarissa's improvement was huge, good job with her upgrade.

Yeah it was sad, but it worked as a good story/plot point. One more thing though and i'll stop bothering you lol. Wtf is up with her, the first time you visit her in the afterlife she says she can't wait to be re-united with you. Then the next time you visit your daughter, she's like, "yeah she can't see you anymore, she went back to her husband". Shit man, it feels like we're even being cucked in the afterlife now. It's getting really excessive and becoming off putting. It completely of ruined the emotional impact of her character.....

You say Livvy can be a side LI? Hmmm I guess I messed up somewhere with her then. I chose to bring her with me to the East, and then told her I wanted to keep the relationship going, but she dumps you anyways. I found it weird that she'd do that, now that she's finally rid of Rebeus and that you're not travelling as much. Kind of messed up actually, it makes it seem like she was only with you because of Rebeus.

Btw thanks for the response and not getting defensive. I appreciate that u seem to listen to feedback. I'll be honest, i'm sticking with the game mainly because I like the story. I don't really like the main LI's. For starters, many of the random side girls are WAY more attractive than them. And shit, one of them is a really old Woman and a massive hoe who would literally partake in orgies. No offense, but that's not main LI material lol. She has a heart to heart with the MC, and goes on to describe her disgusting sex life in detail. It just doesn't make much sense to add these details unless you have some sort of NTR or cuck fetish......

I DO like the game overall, I just wish we didn't have to hear every LI's entire sexual history every single time we talk to them

Is Seraphion, the angel princess going to be a LI eventually? I hope so, she's the hottest woman i've seen so far in the game. And it'd be cool to have a non-human LI too

I mean, your brother literally picks Livvy up and takes her with him when you're all visiting the brothel. So how was she "lying" when it basically happened right in front of you?

Edit: Just got to the part in chapter 2 and the only thing Livvy was lying about was that she loved Rubeus. She still had sex with him, so I don't see how that clears anything up. She could've just refused all that stuff and told the MC, but she didn't. In fact she said she enjoyed the orgies organized by Rubeus. And then Charlotte STILL has the hots for Rubeus even after he drugged and almost raped her...... even with his pheromone potion or whatever that's disgusting. Are you going to ease up on all this cucking and NTR shit, or can we expect more of that? Because it's getting annoying at this point. EVERY SINGLE LI (Except the elf girl) so far is constantly talking about fucking other men(or actually fucking them). It's a bit excessive. If you want to make an NTR game just do it, and put it in your tags.

This game should be called "The Cuck Chronicles". Sorry, but the NTR vibes are way too strong with this one. A shame, I was really enjoying the story. So far i've met 5 LI's. One of them said to your face that she would fuck your brother, the other one you apparently willingly share her with him, and the third(your ex) cheated on you.... again with your brother. Then comes Charlotte, I think FINALLY a LI that isn't a whore, but nope, then you have the scene with her were she fantasizes about sucking another Man's dick...... If you're gonna have NTR, at least give us the option to tell the girls off, and call them out for being whores, it would at least give us SOME satisfaction lol. 

Might as well just make the brother the MC at this point

Am I missing something? I just played through the whole game and there is ZERO mention of either of your two "childhood friends" having had sex with anyone else

Game went to shit after Xiomara just randomly decided to leave. She was basically the only good thing about the game, and Dev decided it was a good idea to get rid of her out of nowhere. Also made zero sense story-wise. You JUST got divorced, she JUST confessed that she's been in love with you for years, then all of a sudden she decides it's a good time to move away and live with her friend lol? I sort of lost interest in the game after that, but I might give it another chance, hopefully there's more Mara. It was such a weird decision by the dev to have her leave, the relationship dynamic between Mc, his sister, and Mara was really the main appeal of the game.

Edit: Well I finished the game, that was a very weird and abrupt ending. You open the restaurant. Xiomara tells you she's leaving the country, the end.......

You said in another comment that there IS pregnancy

Cool, thanks for your fast responses.

And oh really? I must have missed that scene. I'll replay it again then when chapter 2 comes out. Looking forward to it

Suuure, whatever you say cuck

Ahh okay, gotchya, that makes sense. Sounds good to me. Sorry, i'm just paranoid from so many NTR Devs lying about their games or refusing to tag it appropriately lol.

WHile I have your attention, will the MC be using her.... pussy in sexual acts, or just her male part lol? Just curious

And if i'm guessing what this says correctly, you didn't confirm anything. All you "confirmed" is that your game is bugged..... Here is the pic of Marvin's dialogue.

Why do you expect me to be able to read French? All I understand here is "If pl.sexual orientation == Hetero". Although the fact you are French explains SO much about your attitude

I'm assuming this is from the beginning of the game where you select sexual orientation? Here, i'll  show you a screenshot of my selection summary which says: "Sexual Orientation: Straight"?? I can even film it, and show you that it says straight, then play up until the point where Marvin starts saying gay shit.

"Harem but with focus on polyamorous relationships".... Wtf does this mean? Basically NTR? I cant imagine NTR working in a game that has an MC like this one

Exact response I expected from a disingenous creep like you. I selected 'STRAIGHT" in the beggining. And no, your "code" is 100% "lying". I selected the option "I do not want to see Marvin's private fantasy", then he goes on to talk about how he liked feeling your cum on him. And there were NO other options for anything even remotely gay before that. Maybe don't force your  kinks on people, and everything would be fine. So go ahead, please tell me where I "chose the option to talk about his dick". If you can tell me where I supposedly chose that option I'll change my rating from 1 star to 5, and I'll sub to your highest Patreon sub. I dare you

Why is the Intimacy with Elissa not going up? It's stuck at 2 even after her sex scene, which shows you gaining intimacy points during it. Also how the hell do you get the sex scene with Fuyu, I only managed to get it in Story Mode. In Sandbox mode I can only get the scene of her playing with herself, no matter what I do

Should've guess by the MC design. But man I couldn't make it past 30 min of playing, couldn't take the cringey Gen-Z Liberal dialogue, not to mention how pretentious it is . Also I love how I selected NO NTR at the beginning, and your mom and MC are already talking about spit-roasting her with another man in their first conversation. Honestly I think i've seen more sex scenes with other Men than the MC at this point.... There's NTR ALL over this game. Don't fucking say there's "No NTR" if I'm going to see other Men fucking Women every 5 minutes. 

Also wtf is up with the Women being so hairy, these chicks even have armpit and stomach hair, they're hairier than I am lmao.  Not to mention most of the Women in this game are hideous, except for the prostitutes -___- . And I also love how I selected "straight" at the beginning of the game, yet there's a picture of MC getting fucked in the ass, and Marvin talks about how he liked thinking about your cum on him...... Seriously wtf is this trash. Why even give us options for.... "kinks" if you're not going to fucking respect them. Absolute garbage game

I don't really like how you're locked onto a LI route without a choice. I got locked onto Laylas path and we are apparently "dating" now. I was aiming for Amelia, is she locked out now that im with Layla?

Loving the game so far. High quality renders, animations and sex scenes could use some work but they're not bad, interesting story, beauitful love interests(especially the android). Looking forward to more updates. But again, about the sex scenes, something about them is off. Theyr'e too.... abrupt. It's like they're just thrown in randomly. I'd like it if they felt more natural and flowed with the game better, like have some sexual/emotional build up to them. 

Has this game been abandoned? It looks like he took down his Patreon

Pretty good, beautiful renders. Has big Summer's Gone vibes. But it came out 3 years ago and only has 1 episode so far?

Ohhh okay, gotchya. I misunderstood. Also, I absolutely love this game, out of hundreds of AVN's i've played, this is in my top 3 in terms of story. That said, I really hope you work on the sex scenes a bit. They need some work. I'm fine with them not being animated, but if they're going to be only static renders then they need to be really good. Right now, the scenes seem to have only like 2-5 diff renders, and they're not very good. An example of an AVN that has great non-animated sex scenes is "Origin Story" if you want some inspiration. Anyways, good luck with your work. Can't wait for the next update.

PS. I love Sparkle, I really hope she's a LI and we get to see a lot more of her

I checked out your Disc, and it looks like you're not working on this game anymore, but switching to a diff game?? And i'm curious, you mentioned it took TWO YEARS to just get this short demo out? I mean, the quality is obviously amazing, but damn, that's a long time for 30 min of gameplay

Love the graphics, the story seems interesting so far, and it's well written. I wish the first episode was a bit longer, there's not much content yet.  I also hope there is Emily content soon, I love her design. But unfortunetly, judging by the fact one of the LI's has a Queen of Spades tattoo , i'm assuming there is going to be NTR or cucking...... so I don't think this game is going to be for me.  Even if there isn't NTR, considering the MC is White, I cant take a LI that has a Queen of Spades tattood on her face seriously. I'm also like 90% sure Victoria is cheating on you, there's something off about her. And when you talk to her on the phone, she says she's at home yet it shows that she's outside.

Seriously what's going on, SO many AVN's now coming out with NTR, it's gross

-_____- I'm trying to figure out if there's NTR. Guess i'll just pass since you don't want to "spoil" it

I suggest seeing a therapist and stop trying to push NTR everywhere. NTR is not a "fetish", it is a trauma response and a mental disorder

Wait, there are scenes where the MC watches LI's fuck other Men?? Sorry, but that's straight up NTR in my book. Guess i'll pass on this one

What happens?

You talked up how 0.5 would have some sex scenes, yet all I got was a few renders of a short BJ from Melisa? Am I missing something? You said there's two Melisa sex scenes??

Huge potential here. Beautiful renders, and a very interesting story. Unfortunetly there's not much lewd content. You gotta speed up the relationship building a bit, as amazing as the story is, there's been a little too much focus on it, while ignoring everything else. Still, im loving the game so far, in terms of story, this is probably my top 3 AVN's

Awesome, glad to hear it. I assumed there wouldn't be, but thanks for the confirmation

This game is a hidden gem. 5/5 It has an amazing soundtrack(up there with Summer's Gone, BaDIK etc.), beautiful renders, interesting story, good animations, gorgeous & unique LI's(I absolutely love Aurora). It's the full package. My one complaint is that I wish it took itself a bit more seriously. I like the humour in it, but I feel like it's too.... light-hearted overall. It doesn't really work with this story. Also I see the Dev is taking the Bladerunner approach to the android(Aurora), she has false memories implanted and doesn't seem to know she's an android. this is just a personal preference, but I kind of wish she was a regular, sentient android, that knows she's an android. Anyways, great game, can't wait to see more

I'm so paranoid thanks to NTR Devs REFUSING to put NTR in their tags, that any tag even slightly related(like blackmail, cheating, sexual harrasment etc) are immediete red flags. I'm still going to give this game/Dev the benefit of the doubt and try the game though. It's looking really good so far

Damn, this game looked good was about to download it. What a shame. I'm getting tired of all these AVN's that make every single girl an absolute degenerate whore. Having 1 or 2 girls like that is understandable.... but a lot of these devs just go overkill with it. Like what's even the point/motivation in wanting to invest in these girls and get to know them if they're all like that.

And from the Devs responses here, i have a feeling the game is gonna be full of NTR. So i'm out

My God, WAY too dialogue heavy, it just goes on and on and on. I can tell this Dev just loves the sound of his own voice. This is probably one of the weirdest AVN's i've played. Not my cup of tea. And the MC is infuriating, the way he overthinks everything is very annoying. Imagine a deer caught in the headlights.... that's the MC for like 90% of the game lol. I might be a little too harsh on this game, it's not necissarly bad, just not for me I guess

Sooo, the MC is a pro fighter, and he gets his ass beat by some random douche at a party.... well that totally killed the vibe of the game. And to top it all off, you get cockblocked right before the end. Not a good way to end the first chapter. Honestly, I really don't understand what goes through AVN Dev's heads sometimes