To start, My save files date back to the start of 2021. I decided to search this VN up after quite some time, and was pleasantly surprised to find an almost completely different game. I downloaded it and finished chapter 1 in one sitting at the time of writing this comment.
My two major "issues" would have to be:
1. The font
Slightly straining at first, you eventually get used to it. The ability to change it without throwing back a million errors would be nice though, as it left my eyes feeling weird after awhile.
2. Oversized genitalia
Basically my only gripe regarding the art, otherwise it suits the story really well. I know this has been rectified to some extent but calling it a distraction is an understatement. Regardless, it doesn't affect the score or my opinion of the VN as a whole.
I think the rewrite is amazing and makes the story much easier to follow along with when compared to 2021. The writing is excellent and consistent. The theme and plot are pretty solid and leave lots of room for expansion in future chapters.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this seems to be a one man show. I hope to see an official public discord server where (hopefully) community members can contribute to the project. Although the goal of 20+ chapters is commendable, it's highly unrealistic for someone with a life and a job.
Overall, this VN gets a solid 8.5/10. I wish you all the best with your project, and hope you seriously consider a public discord server!
P.S The fact that there are only 90 reviews is a travesty, if you haven't already I would highly recommend advertising your VN (and hopefully your related discord server) in the Furry Visual Novel discord server. (Feel free to mention me when you do! @Weed Priest)
P.P.S Given the clear amount of effort and time investment, this VN deserves WAY more attention and support.