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Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for such a great read. I loved how you used music and programming to make some moments so special and impactful. 

Also, I appreciate that the MC is confident and ambitious. There's too many GFVNs where the MC is a bumbling, stumbling pile of awkwardness, and I appreciate the ones that don't fall into this trope.

Can't wait to hear news about Dryz!

I love this VN! I'm probably about 90% through getting all endings, and I have to say, this is one of very few VNs where I really really like the MC, especially as I get to know him more throughout each play through. He's so cute and sweet and innocent and I can genuinely understand why all the other boys crush on him, rather than it feeling forced. Says a lot from me too as I'm a sucker for a himbo. 

Well done!

Are there any plans to make the route requirements less specific? I love this VN and I'm excited to see it continue, but I don't love that I had to look up how exactly to get Darrell's route (the one I was trying for in the first place). Maybe an invisible point system like other VNs do?

The way I RAN to make an account to reply to this topic. I am so very excited to hear you are working on this and I love the fact that you are encouraging community engagement for it. You guys are the best. 

1. I think with Asterion being our precious virgin star, it would be most appropriate to continue the “slow-burn” approach the novel has had so far. Before the actually sex, it would be great to have a scene or two (or ten) where the lovers engage in more innocent acts. That said, when it comes to the sex, I think it would only be appropriate story-wise for the first time to be very vanilla missionary with lots of eye contact. Imagine a CG where MC is knocking on the back door and decides to have a taste. To have the bull look down over his body and past his bull-hood to make flustered eye contact with his love who is gently tonguing his South Star — the bull being completely enraptured by new sensations after millennia of misery and torture — would be poetry. I want to see every involuntary reaction from that bull’s face as he finally gets his chance to feel real carnal pleasure. When the entry is made, I want that eye contact and closeness to continue. Asterion being the strong man he is, would be able to power bottom his way into a closer and more intimate position where the two are able to kiss and feel each other and bask in each other’s love while engaging in this, the ultimate act of intimacy. Once the bull acclimates himself to the feeling of receiving his sweetheart’s sex, I want to see the fleeting away of momentary pain melt into not just carnal pleasure, but loving correctness. Finally after so long, the bull is exactly where he ought to be doing what deserves. He wanted this for so much longer than he even realized. I want his first act to culminate in feelings of love that he — and quite possibly MC — never thought attainable. 
2. I’d love a scene where a tender cuddle looking out the window turns a bit more daringly explorative vis a vis groping, necking, extended making out. Fluster. That. Bull. Tug on his nose ring, kiss along his neck until you find the spot that makes him moan the loudest, twirl his tail in your fingers, grope his bara tiddies, flick his nipple, trace the outline of his bull hood in his pants. I have full confidence that the writers have thought extensively about this and will deliver.
3. Then a scene where our bull turns the tables on MC would be chef’s kiss. If MC has expressed being flustered by having Asterion mount him, it would only be poetic to have Asterion exert that over MC in a more sexually exciting way: extended necking, nipple play, groping, etc. leading to Asterion making the next step to hand stuff and mouth stuff. Verbal teasing throughout all of this is almost assumed. 
4. Sauna makes the most sense here. I don’t think I have too much to add that others haven’t already said.
5. Throughout the novel so far, MC has been rightfully cautious and aware of the bull’s feelings, so I don’t think it would be very appropriate for him to cross lines with sexual acts or kinks, but what I think might actually happen is that, while drunk, the MC might get frisky while him and Asterion are in the public areas of the hotel. I could see this causing a bit of a disagreement between the two of them.
6. I think I addressed this earlier when I got carried away by horny thoughts.
7. Asterion seems to have a side of him that wants the MC to be more dominant. I would love to see Asterion become a power bottom in this case. It would be interesting to create a dynamic where Asterion encourages the MC into situations where MC explores the bull’s body. An “I’ll close my eyes. Touch me wherever you’d like” sort of scene would be magical. (I'm drawing inspiration from Brogulls by AntiDev here.)
8. I think Asterion would be into extended foreplay and kissing for sure. Teasing verbally and physically seems to be his favorite way to encourage intimacy. I think he would be just as much into smelling natural body odors as the MC seems to be. EDGING. Hoo boy. A scene where MC edges a big bull load out of Asterion would be GOTY stuff. I think just the lightest form of bondage would make sense. Nothing more than a linen tied to a bed post or even self restraint by way of holding his hands behind said bed post while the MC has his way with Asterion’s body. I could see Asterion being really into MC’s cum — like an “anything you create is perfect” sort of angle. 

I’m going to stop myself here. I don’t want to gush too much. (Double entendre unintended) but thank you all again for this wonderful novel and this opportunity to voice our opinions and desires about it. <3