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Going off of 1.2, the errors I found are small so far: some spots where you can walk onto a space that shouldn't be there, but the main things I was seeing were grammatical errors. Just spelling or a bit of wording missing. There are also still just placeholders; not sure if 1.2 is meant to be a more full release. But having a thing pop up that says [pov looking up at changing], while meant to be an ending, still throws a bit off when a lot of others do seem to have it. 

No worries, that is what I did. 

Handy, but lol ya, was stating that. I've seen that in the other game they have out. 

Ah, the one you are working on the beta for? I didn't really see anything in that one yet, just little ones here. I will add that the password, while knowing it, I do wonder as I tried to use Japanese to put in the other spells, to see if it name me body swap or into an object that isn't an animal, and didn't have luck as I couldn't find all the needed symbols. 

Going over it, I found a fair amount of missed things that were translated the first time but not the second. As well as errors, such as instead of her foot, it's his foot. If you would like some help with the proofreading. Feel free to reach out. 

Overall, I'd say it's a good demo, and the quick battle button is a nice addition. Just one little add-on, I'd say, is maybe add a spot where you can see the tfs that have happened again?