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Eh, this is a good start? But it really needs more substantial content before I would try to post it to itch.io...

And, you really need an editor, as the grammar and sentence structure is ... Er... Very very unprofessional.

Its a good first try though! ^_^;;;

I've been playing for an hour and a half and have yet to end the game. There seems to be a multiple play through mechanic as well so... I'm expecting 4-5hrs worth of game play

This is a really  decent game. 10/10

Errr.... I don't think this is working for phones. 

Wow, this visual novel has some great potential! I enjoy the game play mechanics and can't wait to see how you tie in the alchemy to the story!

Hay! Killer7! Ya You, Giving me Da Feels, In Me Porn! Good Shit! Keep It UP!

All jokes aside this is a very well written story line and I can't wait to see what you have planed for later!