I am very excited to see this game in full! The story feels genuine, and intriguing. I loved it! I'm a bit desperate to continue playing, if I'm being honest. As a note, Mr. Worthington may be my favorite (I agree with much of what the previous reviewer Kirlett said).
If I may - I strongly recommend that when you do launch your gofundme that you outline a release timeline for the game and be as transparent as possible regarding development updates. I am an avid visual novel/interactive fiction supporter - but I will say a lot of projects sit abandoned and would hate to see the same come of this story. I am very excited to support this project when the time comes!