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fengniao703

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What a good story... I truly shed tears for Atlas. Thank you for making such a game.

To enable my friends who are not good at English to enjoy the game, I rushed to make a translation patch and had to go through all the options, whether sweet or sad. At first, I was very afraid that Atlas would completely lose his humanity and do some bloody things - but he didn't. Even when he was furious, he would wake up and cry because his wife's cherished items were damaged or because he was afraid of not being good enough for her (I had to find a tissue to wipe my eyes again). Throughout the entire piece, his actions have always been expressing his love for his wife. Even though he has become like this, one can still see the once vibrant performance of Atlas. It's hard not to love him.....

Since verbs in my native language do not have past tense inflections, it took me a little time to realize that "He was my husband" in Iris' s mental activity was not emphasizing "once a husband", but because the narrator throughout the text uses the past tense...... I'm very curious about why it is? Perhaps the story will be written much later, and Iris and Atlas are snuggling up to each other to write their memoirs? (Bad Ending is too painful, please allow me to ignore it for now.) At that time, will Atlas turn back into a human and take Iris on a trip, or will he still maintain his beast form, shyly lying beside Iris and coquettishly asking her to comb his fur? Their relationship is so sweet. Thank you again for creating such two lovely characters.

(Some sentences were translated with a translator. I'm very sorry if there was any offense)

Sorry to keep you waiting! Since the web disk I use in China is not commonly used in other countries, I have researched how to send the file to you. I finally signed up for a Dropbox account and uploaded the files, I wonder if this is convenient for you? If not, I'll try something else. Here is the link

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/n9ggfx07721fwanw24dmd/Chinese-patch-pack-Insomnia...

I thought watching the whole story would tell me what the duckling were missing, but Lucas just left me with a cliffhanger .SO SAD(just kidding). He is so cute......

In order to recommend the game to my friends who are not good at English, I made a simple Chinese patch for them. I hope more people will like this story! Thank you for such a lovely story and Lucas!

My English is also not very good, there may be grammatical errors in the comments, please forgive me QAQ

I'm sorry that my mother tongue is not English, so there may be some mistakes in my words and grammar, I apologize in advance.

I really liked the story, from Asher's character to the changes he decided to make. It's no exaggeration to say that Asher gave me a break from the stress of life. So I really wanted to recommend this game to my friends, but they are also not very good at English, so I made a simple Chinese version for them. I would like to know if I can post this version on Chinese social networking platforms?

I promise I won't make any money from it (to be honest my translations are a bit crude and not worth a tip), and will include an itch download link along with the release. In order to avoid offending you, I won't try to post until I get a reply (again sorry because it's not very convenient to use Twitter in China so I can only question here), and if I can't post it, it's okay. Thank you so much for making such a great game.