Thanks for the feedback!
Embrace of the One Voice is meant to be minimalist. With Ingregnation I was insecure in my writing and I liked making content more than writing the scenes for it, which made me anxious because the still-to-do scenes were piling up. So for Comet and Embrace I discarded the descriptions entirely.
I still tried to give the characters some personality trough their name and starting Cultivation. Lady Jade starts with high Cultivation, she's a mature woman who has been Cultivating for a long time. Miss Saffron on the other hand has considerable Talent but is still progressing, she is not past her peak like Lady Jade. I guess it's more obvious when you know Cultivation naturally goes up to the square of Talent.
About the fail state, I would like to know how impactful it is. I have a biased view of it because I know how to progress efficiently. I drop no lower than 40 years of Life Expectancy before I'm able to impregnate the lower characters often enough to raise it back up. Do you actually reach that point? When you do, what's your Cultivation level and who is the last character you unlocked? Do you use the quickload buttons to undo/retry segments?


