Wow, what a fantastic module! Bizarre, but playable and fun. Just reading about it, I could imagine all the fun things that could happen while playing it. Very enjoyable, definitely one of my favorites this year.
I love the map and the aesthetic. The nostalgic tone of the story is beautifully captured in both the descriptions and the unique little mechanics. Beautiful work!
Thank you for taking the time to read it and write a detailed review! Yes, the room descriptions are indeed quite long, but I'm still getting used to OSR's concise writing style. It's also true that it's short on treasures, unfortunately due to space limitations. I've learned a lot participating in this jam. Thank you!
I remember your submission from last year and immediately recognized your style, which is super cool. A really good and complete adventure, full of exploration and fun things to interact with. It has the perfect balance of "bizarre" and "playable adventure," which isn't always the case in entries for this contest. One of my favorites this year.
I'm going to put this in the 'definitely going to run it' category! I'm amazed at how you've used the limited space available to create not just a hexcrawl, but also a dungeon, both of exceptional quality! One of my favorites this year.
I loved the initial premise of the adventure and the introduction, especially this line "Looters are already swarming onto the broken piece of heaven like ants on a dropped jam sandwich" that says everything you need to know in a very evocative way.
The idea of a vertical depthcrawl with armor carrying limitations seems super fun. Excellent work
I read it and enjoyed it; an intriguing and mysterious exploration with bizarre surprises. The map is very well integrated into the pamphlet's design and the adventure narrative itself; it feels organic and an integral part. Great work; it definitely caught my attention.
Excellent work! A lot of material packed into a small space. I loved how the descriptions have just the right amount of information, nothing is superfluous or lacking. The map design is also very concise, useful, and functional. I'm definitely going to run it!
