@InvaderGary : Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
make sure to finish this masterpiece in your lifetime, and don't let naysayers get to you or burn yourself out going too fast, as soon as I have disposable income again, Ill support you wherever I can find you.
My feelings :
Pro :
Just played the entire currently freely available game, (s2p2) in a single day and I know ill play it again because the writing, music and animations are so unbelievably good.
Some suspension of disbelief is needed for a 4 1/2 women (and 1 optional man) sexual Harem but all the relationships are actually endearing, believable enough and sometimes just SO fucking adorable.
Con:
From other comments I read, the silly slapstick in a AVN is not for everyone (though it is for me, good lord is it funny at times)
Not a big fan of the magical slave contract genre and there's at least one slave relationship forced, and though I do ship it, and I do see that it needs to happen for the narrative you are building, I will pray that there is a way to undo it by the end, even against her will. Or I will probably cry. I ugly-cry, you have been warned.
Magnificent work.