I'm not sure if you'll see this comment, but I just wanted to say that I genuinely think you're so talented and I cannot WAIT for more parts!! Your art style is my absolutely favourite and something I aspire to draw like one day, and your storytelling?? Chefs kiss 🤌🤌 I love love LOVE how you've written Lane's character, I've never seen a piece of fiction act so similarly to the boys at my school lol, and BB?? Godddd I found him so cute at the start but the more I explored the different outcomes and choices, that prickling feeling of unease just kept growing.
You had me physically gasping when he mentioned at the bus stop how he knew I liked the drink I chose at the cafe a month back, and when he knew where I lived without me even telling him. I don't know if I've seen all of the options yet but noooo he's definitely a weird creepy stalker eughh... BRO I JUST HAVE TO SAY, like, you KNOW a story/game is top tier when you feel genuine shivers and unease, and that's exactly what I felt during the scene where we were in BBs perspective and he was in our apartment building... (Speaking of that, it seemed like he knew Amelia somehow... HMMMMM...) AND the scene where we were a little sharp with him and everything just turned dark and red—it was INSANE seeing how easily he could switch up from an awkward guy to a cold, intimidating man. Aaaah I just had to write this all out because I'm genuinely blown away!!! I'm new to itch.io and this whole visual novel thing, and I've literally never consumed yandere media before, or whatever you call it. So cool! There's soooo much that I'm curious about and I can't wait to find out why we're scared of red and what happened to us. I wonder what'll happen when we find out for real that BB has been stalking us... Is he somebody from our past that we know? What are his intentions? Maybe he doesn't want to show us his face because we WILL recognise him. Boom. Plot twist. He's so hotttt but I hate him so much, I can't with creepy men, even if they're just made up, makes me feel so uneasy
I need to stop yapping fr, love this so much!!! aaaah if you see this and bother to read it all, pleaseeee let me know how many shifts you're planning on writing, because when you release the full game I'm definitely buying, 100% i hope both sides of your pillow remain nice and cold forever
