It does help though it could be argued that once you mix the playbook moves alongside of it, it's kinda difficult to always remember when a move is triggered. (this article talks about it : https://blackarmada.com/pbta-moves-overload/ ). And while you do have a point , perhaps it would be better to make some moves more, general if they're very similiar.
Well it's simple, you already got the big three chapters, just add under them like chapter 2.4 : Armor , and so on. I think it's just a little awkward how empty it is and a little odd considering you do have distincting chapters with a bigger font, so it's just adding those so that the player can easily say:" Wait which page was the one about armor again? Oh yeah page 18". Most other books do this.
That's fair enough and I look forward to it.