Yo! Ran through the demo with my wife just now! Loved the huge amount of art you put in to it so far! It's great to see you not shy away from so many full color backgrounds and environments. The character designs and color choices were lovely, and it's amazing to see you show off in those click-through comic book moments, really makes the whole thing stand out more. Looking forward to the next part!
Great start! There's a lot of thought put in to this, I was surprised how much background you had for all the characters and happy to see the tension in the story. One of my fav entries for sure. Great job putting this much together and good luck on the rest!
