good proof of concept! obviously right now it's a bit bare bones, so I can't really critique that haha. I think mostly it just needs some extra features, like other options other than shirt/skirt (i hear some people prefer glasses on their ladies, so that could be a fun little addition for those people, and also an interesting productivity detriment). it would also be interesting if you got messages that helped you towards your goal, like an opportunity to have a colleague work on your report for you while you're "busy". this could have its own positives and negatives, and perhaps lend itself to multiple endings if you're inclined for that kind of game! i wonder, are the final images going to be still images or full animations? since right now it feels like it's mostly a waiting simulator (which i can't really say anything about since that's what was advertised ahaha) i think it would keep players focused longer if there was more to look at than just still images. also, i wonder if there'll be multiple different men characters, rather than the same one with mild color edits over and over. it'd be a bit more work, but it'd definitely make it a bit more interesting. and maybe you could add a mode that had women come by as well :0 just an idea, i'm not trying to shove this all on you haha. other than that, very interesting concept, and off to a good start! i realized halfway through my playthrough that it would probably be better to be focused on fucking so i could get them away faster, but i still lost :,) but it was still fun, even during the waiting segments, because i just looked over the base sketch and how it differed from the mostly-complete sketch (though i doubt most non-artist players will notice all that :P maybe add some fun easter eggs in the background for them, like a pen with some kind of naughty topper on it lol). the messages and responses were also very funny, and i'm sure if i were more invested in the sex than the report, it would probably be pretty attractive how nobody really paid much attention to her lackluster responses. anyways, great start and i wonder how it'll turn out in the end!
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