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big fan of the space and knocking stuff over, unsure of what version of this im playing but id love some whimsy backing audio! I could see it really tying together the experience you've created.

I really love the ambience and environment you built. It's so incredibly well put together as well as thought out, I do wish the resolution was higher to further emphasize the scenery, but I know you were having issues with it. I also felt that the window/trigger for interactions was a bit finnicky with the notes, and I had to properly position my mouse to interact. However! I love it and you should be so proud of yourself <3

I like the sliding and the sound effect, it was pretty fun after beating the learning curve. I will say I think the mouse sensitivity is a bit too high, makes the control a bit less intuitive.

Really amazing visuals and sound as per usual, I'd love to see a larger scope in some future, or perhaps more dialogue with certain items in ui? Amazing work <

The art and concept is so charming, i love the freedom of movement. I'd simply suggest tweaking gravity and the move component so the dog doesn't move upside down or slide. Overall though, really excited to see what it becomes and awesome job!

I think this is so nostalgic and really cool! It's very charming and I totally see this as an arcade game. My only nitpick is that the controls feel a bit overwhelming? Specifically having to point the gun, and move, and shoot almost all at the same time. I did get used to it after a bit and overall it was very cool, great job!

I enjoyed this so so much, I love all the art and silly comments. for being a demo yall got so much done and it was amazing seeing this come to fruition! My only nitpick is that the doors are a bit wonky and I had to maneuver through em to get into rooms or back out of rooms. Overall, amazing!

Really love the art elements yall made! I think I agree with others that the card fight can be a bit unbalanced and tedious. However! Amazing work and overall really fun, would love to see it fledged out someday^^

This is so sick, i have no idea how you got all the textures and lighting! The camera shift between levels is personally a bit disorienting, but overall, really amazing and excited that yall take this further.

So fun, I love circling through all the endings and found myself really unexpectedly enthralled! Even when knowing there was a secret ending I still struggled and really had to look to get it (totally not with any help at all). I think use of sound whether it be music or even a subtle electrical humming/purring in the bg could've added a lot to your ambience, but overall really great and good replay ability! 

Nice Job!! 

Love the save game options and the side bar elements! The font and color have that cold icy/water feel and adds to the immersion. My only critique is that the links are a bit hard to discern from the text since it's the same color, maybe having the options a bit different would help the viewer progress more easily, overall nice job!

can't even begin to describe how charming this game is and I haven't even gotten halfway through (i assume), the different fonts are really immersive and don't clash which is great! A fun take on a story most people know. The switch to white when its day is really great theming, overall a joy to go through!

really love the visual elements you've created! The story itself is quite strong and being the kite is so unique! It was definitely my first choice. Since this is a prototype I wonder if you'll have sound in the future? (i saw the hal audio so i assumed sound is something you were playing with). Simply wish there was a bit more!

Blown away with the style, sound, depth, etc. Really awesome to see how you built this up from scratch. Great music choice and character design! My only critique is that I wish the textbox was a teensy bit bigger to make reading the intricate narrative a bit easier, even with the scrollbar. Overall though I keep going back to this game and really enjoy it!

Really thought out, and the multiple endings makes it fun to replay! The sounds aid the visuals really well, and you created a great ambience.  I actually enjoyed the mix of negative space with the images, but do agree with other comments that the font change could add to the overall immersion. Awesome job!!