help HAHA i literally thot that was just random writing i was expecting something else. thank u, u can delete ur comment now if spar0w wants to keep it a secret or something
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girllll i stalked ur tumblr, and all the comments here HAHA OMG U LIKED Forcefully yours too!!! I was just thinking BB reminds me of Lionbright from Forcefully yours when i played for the first time, and i was kind of comparing how much i liked BOTH of fuzzycuff's writing style and yours! I love u guys equally btw!!! I miss riker so much, i hope fuzzycuffs is okay.
i'm buzzing lol i hope time speeds tf up because i want to read it all from start to finish and devour all the lore! but srsly, as Lane says "im gonna wait so hard baby" XD (im gonna bark so good ,baby)
I AM SOOOO OBSESSED WITH THIS! OML!
ngl im an avid consumer of visual novels ever since i was in highschool till now that im a full grown working adult, so u can just guess how many ive tried lol. i wasnt expecting much since tbh im picky with prose and dialogue but this was amazing from start to finish! I LOVE how you wrote the two bad dogs, especially Lane. He is so consistent as a character and his flaws make genuine sense. Its not there just to make a cliche checklist, i feel like he really is human and complex. I understand MC so much! Like....I wanna strangle Lane so bad but he can be so freaking funny and charming too...like wow i wanna kiss him but also slap him in the face and knock him down several pegs.
I cant say much about biker dude since i barely know him but he is so cute! Im so curious y he's deranged for MC and his character, you know...his POV at the end of shift 2 was such a big tonal change from how he is with MC. SO CONCERNING! SO DELICIOUSLY RIPE WITH LORE.
Edit: i just finished a BB branch...WTF wow so theyre really both chauvinistic pigs. I'm crying it was so jarring from this "nice" guy persona. That part where he got mad at MC was like being drenched in ice it really struck that part of me when i was younger and had to carry the men...Hes not wrong its just...it makes me really mad he saw that you know? ugh like...its just touches that raw part of you that wants justice but maybe you stopped hoping for it because it never changes anyway and u had to swallow the patriarchy and keep your head down as a woman and u wanna just strangle people who sees that weak, oppressed part of you because its humiliating. UGH the way MC just has that fawn response ingrained into her in conflicts with men...I GET HER SO MUCH...Amelia lets build a woman utopia fr.
Im heartbroken about Amelia and y she has become so cold to MC... SO MYSTERIOUS I MUST KNOWWWW. The fallout mustve been about something terrible
I also love MC she is such a breath of fresh air! she isnt a wilting flower, she's funny, can dish out as much as Lane can give, and her lines are charming too, i can see why Lane and biker boy like her!
ALSO! This whole yandere/obsession men have is definitely DRENCHED in misogyny i AM SO GLAD you've written it so expertly in game. Like wow ive never seen a piece of yan VN where this is so clearly stated again and again. I love your characters so much and I am in love with the way you write. I like how you show rather than tell and sprinkle in lore in a way thats believable and natural. I hope you never stop writing I am such a huge fan of it and I will definitely follow all your creative work from now on