YAS!!!
Ellicott_Bell
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This is life, this is just brilliant - enough said. Y'know what? No, let me continue. I've been absolutely infatuated with the progress of this visual novel, with each new update I find myself far more eager and passionate over every choice that I make. I mean, I'll admit, I spent the last several days checking this page for any kind of reports, and my first reaction to seeing the Peacock was of absolute suspicion. To the point where even thinking about him just makes my blood boil with how I might enact my revenge if my suspicions turned out to be true. I can't even bring myself to be cruel to Asterion, not even with my usually twisted curiosity. You are more than welcome to take you're time, especially since this creation of your's has brought joy to the lives of many. However, I'm sure you don't need me to spell it out based on the overwhelming support I see in the comments. Although, it warrants repeating.
Just E X T R A O R D I N A R Y .
I've never really made a visual novel before so I don't know if my feedback is all that valid, but I do think there's potential here. Especially in your idea of creating a autobiographical video game, but be sure to be showing instead of telling the player information. I think that's why games containing so much story and lore are quite long. Every piece of info is delivered in a discreet way. Of course, sometimes this can be broken, although it should fit within the context and/or not be so long as to bore the player or disconnect them from that "invested in the game" mind setting.
-This is just my take on the game.
P.S. The part when you started talking to your past self was absolutely amazing.