Ok so i have already arond 10 hours on the game and i already have unlocked everything so i think i can give some good advices also, the game itself is very good, the only problem is easly game because the tutorialare really difficult to understand, likei had to use a trick to pass the first days because the tutorial really doesn't help you in understanding you needto click and on the attack and thenalso click the adversary (i honesly see this feautur eonly useful if the pointer would be way brighter and use donly when groups fights will be added), other than that i personally think the coins are way to farmable and at the same time inflantion is crazy, the fact everything cost so much makes so when you start to have th etrading post the gold mines are useless (because slavetrading is way more profitable), honestly the rest is good, the H scenes are really good to be in alpha and also i am surprised there also sounds, i had only some problem with the name sign above people heads when i were on missionary mode second phase (for that i would suggest to disable if you use first person the texts above the head at the end its not meant to be seen in the first place soo), anothe problems i got is in the dungeon when you are in the inventory the scroll to pass to a category to another is way slower than when ytou are out of the dungeon, also for some reason stats like mana or health wouldn't increase with level (so i was pratically able to oneshot level 100 using lv 10), othe rthan that and some minor texure clipping in the baths, other than those small problems everything for me was fine.
SUGGESTIONS
Might be an unpopular one but i think the dunegon shouldn't be freerly customisable, why? simply because the props and the dungeon itself isn't that much of customisable in a cool way from the first place, instead i would reccomend some upgrades wich would expand the dungeon and adding the machineries in proper rooms (like a room for the milking machine, a "club" where therese the bar, the dancing stand and maybe some tables, the basement with all the stuff for tie up people + the spawn of the prisoner you send in the dungeon and so on
Better price balance, because how i said before this seems the congo where you to buy something (like a zombie) you need to spend trilions of gems, bette rpricing would make really us sweat for something and instead of moving golden piles without 0 feelings we would see 10k coins and think "it was difficult but holy shit if now i can finally buy what i want"
More clothing effectes, like the slave like clothing boosting lust and during H sceneses the relationship increase and so on
OVERHAUL
I would give this a good 8/10 as it is an alpha, clearly effort and dedication were put in the creation of this and i respect it , hope to see some updates in the future.
P.S.
I am sorry if there is any grammatical problem in my text but it's pettry late for me
Elingard
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Played both games (this and the sequel) and i can say the story is very well crafted, i would have an long ass comment on how i loved the story and i think the writer is petty fire andthis conviced me to play also her other games but i am not really want to write rn, so yeah very cool game like 70% of yuri games on itch.io games is petty depressing tho (like fr why the hell half of the yuri section on this godanm site is so depressing)
5/5 game, i love the art, the story ect, i am a bit blocked with linora and willow (idk of start the event for then date em) and i would also want point out the game at the start feels a bit disoriented with all the stats and options, but other than those two problems i am feeling the game pettry smooth, i think the card game loop is very cool even tho idk how someone will be able to afford more than the bronze packets before going broke.
P.S.
I am a bit sad there's only a male protagonist because on itch.io there's pratically a vacuum of games (and not visual novels) for lesbian and straight girls, but that isn't even near the point of the game.
Anyway, keep this good work up.
Very cool concept, i love the game and the details I can't say much because is still heavely on development i see, from a mobile part there's some small problems like when you during a night section and you need like remove the shirt for doing so you thumbs end up on the right arm box so after you remove the shirt the game directly obbligates you to do a skill check for moving a part you didn't even need to move, other that everything is ok and i look forward for the development of this game!
Cool game, i like these types of sandbox, only "bad" thing i can say about this game is the development takes time but that's not nobody's fault is just, development isn't the easiest thing on this earth and so i understand these long times, anyway i am really curious to see what 1.5 v will add, keep it up!
Is easy, when she laughs it's means she move, when she is in the room near your room you need to close the door until she laughs again, wich means she will gone to the broom closet, from then every laugh means she is near you room (close door) or in the broom closet (open the door) after you know she in the room near you it just becomes a job of closing opening the door when she laughs