has potential, but honestly in the long term the writing would put me off... the creator needs someone helping with proper english
It's very good so far, enjoyed it thoroughly. Good plot, charachters and quality renders. Great writing as well, had some good laughs! Keep it going.
Brilliant story, went through the whole thing without stopping, really enjoyed it. Great story, charachters and artwork, well done
enjoyed the story thoroughly, very well done writing
