This was an absolutely delightful bite-sized puzzle game! Really captures the Pokemon-style whimsy, and the monster designs are very cute. The two friends' different perspectives on events are fun too!
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This was an intriguing small story with a well-executed twist! This is maybe a weird pull but it reminded me of the folk song Lady Isabel and the Elf Knight.
I would like to suggest, though, that you use paragraph breaks instead of single line breaks. Some passages were really not easy to parse visually, especially once I started expanding text.
I really enjoyed this! The setting is intriguing, and the situational nature of the verbs is an unusual way to do a parser/choice hybrid game that makes it feel like it has a good variety of verbs while limiting combinatorial explosion. I also like how ambiguous some of the verbs are; it leads to some surprising moments as the player experiments with them.
Glad to have answered the question for you! Since the major comps don't place limitations on updates anymore, it seemed like it would be weird to be strict about it in a comp that's supposed to be more laid-back in general. If people abuse the ability, we'll reconsider for future rounds, but it seems unlikely that that will happen.
FYI, that information, along with other key info about the jam, is on the jam overview page, which I encourage you to read over if you haven't yet! https://itch.io/jam/if-short-games-showcase-2023














