This is so sick, I love the progressive destruction with the ongoing siege, rad as hell! The art and the premise are both so cool, they really go hand in hand, great work!
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This fucks so hard. I am so impressed that something this polished can be made in the time and space given for this jam. This has so much sauce yet still allows for so much creativity from those playing it. I really love how the "Heroic Instincts" and "Earths Fury" really incentivise players to overcome the adversities instead of just ripping and tearing through them as cool as that may be, and how much the doomsday move really solidifies this design in a perfect way.
I'm going to be honest, this is fucking awesome. The hex-climb is such a cool idea that I wish I had used for something sooner. The art and layout of this is just so so good, I'm especially fond of the Snow Stealth image for the Mountain King. Actually just the whole Mountain king in general, feeding into the story of their magical corruption, and the secret item/ way to beat them with the Swallowed Sword is just incredibly cool. This adventure not only looks great, but it feels real and lived in. Not even mentioning how cool and unique the frozen treasure is! Like a map carved on a bone, COME ON! THAT'S SICK! I'm super excited to run this for some friends, this adventure is something I would be really genuinely proud of if I made it, I'm taking notes, you did such a great job with this!
I love the cover and the map. Not just the art of the map but the layout and the flow of the whole thing, I really like how open it feels. The descriptions are super clear and pretty interesting, I'd love to see this adventure with full art in the future, I reckon that would be incredible! Really cool adventure!
This is super nice, I love the layout of the whole thing and the roll-back on the navigation system is a really great interpretation of the swing meter and adds a nice little risk/ reward factor. It may take a while to get through due to all the random rolls but I do kinda like the feeling of being lost while you're searching, I think this can be run in a really interesting way! Really great stuff!
Love the design of this whole adventure. It's super well written and drawn, with so much flavour from the descriptions, quotes and rumours. I think the omens are a really really cool addition that really add to this. The super clear map, incorporation of Shune and the way the factions are set up really neatly for RP if you wanted to are all really great additions.
Thank you for such great feedback! I think I'll go back and make another version that's a bit longer with an easier to read layout with toilet markers! and I'll definitely be taking this feedback into account.
I'm glad you like it!
And yes you're absolutely right, I did mean above instead of below, that's 100% my bad, I'll fix it up as soon as I can.




