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As of writing this comment, I still haven't been able to progress past level 1.

Pros:

1. Great concept and narrative

2. Unique gameplay, would probably be more fun when I've figured out how to use the grapples

3. Simple but pretty good art

Cons:

1. The controls for moving left is written as [W] instead of [A] in the "How to Play" section

2. The actual platforms blends too much to the background buildings, making them hard to distinguish especially with night light

3. All 5 quotes in the "You Died" page are shown together instead of (what I think you might've planned to) just one

4. Pressing [Esc] to go back or respawn would get me out of the fullscreen mode first and I keep clicking my browser's search bar. Maybe use another button?

Good game overall, but a bit too hard for me.

Pros:

- Nice pixel art-styled scenery.

- The rl picts compliment the game nicely.

- The top-bottom layering between the avatar and the surroundings is pretty good, though sometimes the avatar looks stuck under parts of the hill.

Cons:

- The avatar character's comments are a bit cringy.

- Too many empty spaces, or the walking speed is too slow.

- Some picture-taking locations are too specific and pretty hard to spot, probably need to be expanded.

- It takes forever to climb the hill to find nothing to capture there and walk back down again... then climbing back up again. Please block the entrance to the hill before the last capture spot is unlocked.

- No animation for getting hit by the train (nah jk).

Good game overall. Would try to get hit again in your next game.