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i rarely comment on anything, and once again it’s your work that made me do it)

just like viatica moved me, this story didn’t leave me indifferent either. i’m mad at myself for noticing the new chapter so late)

the way you write, the characters, their relationships, the whole irredichi lore — it’s something unreal. your writing style just can’t leave anyone untouched. i genuinely admire and bow to the world you create in your mind and with your hands. everything flows smoothly, never drags, always keeps you tense, makes you sad at the right moments, makes you laugh at others, and most importantly — lets the reader live the story. aaah, how heartbreaking the ending of chapter 4 was, but at the same time, you always choose the perfect moment to stop. i admire you! so, so much!

i’m looking forward for the update with so much excitement, but i also hope you’re not exhausting yourself. creativity is a flow we can’t force, something we have no right to squeeze out of ourselves. i wish you inspiration — not only in writing, but in conversations, in work, and everywhere you go; everything can be lit up with creativity. that quiet but unwavering flame burning inside you (from what i’ve seen! in real life it might burn a hundred times brighter!) will help you bring any dream of yours to life!

hope you kissed that rock that you called tragic ending before you threw it right in my face.

beautiful work.

you know, i've never been a fan of dystopias, but this is something else. 

with each page i returned more and more to my childhood. i'm not saying that i've experienced something like this, but about the atmosphere itself. something... dreamlike. something intimate and alive, i would say. this "fantastique" is not hidden here in the magical atmosphere and fiction, respectively, this fantastique of the lines here lies in the hope that you feel while you read, and in the unshakeable faith in the best. you feel the characters, you sympathize with them, you fight and cry shoulder to shoulder with them, you look at this peace from the window with your own eyes, this peace they came to on their own. 

i couldn't stop reading, haha. this short but warm story, and what you, author, have achieved with your word, not everyone can achieve nowadays. 

i'm immensely grateful to you for the rare sense of rightness and peace that you have given me. sorry if my words are not so clear, english is not my native language, but i tried to express my feelings as clearly as possible TT.

if anyone read this comment before going to the story, then i want to tell you that you won't regret it. this is not just fiction. these are pages of hope, this is the story of those in whom this hope has not found its end, those who will continue to pass this hope on to the same burning and passionate souls as themselves.

it's actually so cool, so cool that I had to register to write to you about it. your style is something beyond! 

plot is incredible. It's hard to call me an empathic person, but here, reading and absorbing the grieve of the main character, the emotions of their loss and mourning, I couldn't help but feel it myself. truly magnificent work.

can't wait to meet the other characters. with the emotions you put into them, they seem truly alive. 

I sincerely wish you success in what you are doing! can't wait for further updates!