This is a neat short game! I really liked the dreamy and oppresive atmosphere. I would love to see you take a crack at a longer VN with this kind of feel. The thing I found the most intiriguing were the reocurring themes, such as the faces in the fog/clouds or the childhood memories. It would be quite interesting to see these themes developed in a more cohesive body of work.
Overall, I think this is excellent for a gamejam project! I look forward to your future games.