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hi, I've added one :

Very cool! Full adventure ready to go. Love the demented ghoul in his evil and weakness... and link to the Basilisk cosmology of the Dying Lands. The art is top notch. The prose evocative. 

Nailed the jam brief. Shining dim light on an unknown corner of the Dying Lands. Plenty grist for the mill. I like the monsters having a weakness. 

Great adventure seed. I want to use it right away! 

Cool design and premise. Would have been nice to have the dungeon itself or a bit more direction about Who Dunnit. Useful list of generic clues though.

Hilarious. Last line is a flail to the face! 

Overall concept is intriguing, but could have benefited with a bit more specificity. Lots of good RP seeds, but doesn't all come together under a tight landlocked lighthouse theme.. for me.

Great submission. Tonnes to work with and easy to add to a game. Love the dragon boons and mission tables. Visually, could be more classically MB in colours. Loved it

Idea of parasitic algae is cool. End result just being plain ole death is maybe a lost opportunity. Mind controlled or zombified by algae (with benefits and drawbacks) may offer more opportunities at the gaming table

Cool idea. Visually a bit too haphazard and no focus for the eye. Nice exploration of "bones" as a theme and expressed as practical game elements 

Cool idea. Visually a bit too haphazard and no focus for the eye. Nice exploration of "bones" as a theme and expressed as practical game elements 

Rating based on the free preview only. Styling and art is cool and clear. Nice mix of styles. The setup, hook is fine if a bit stock standard MB. A free version for reviewers on itch would be nice 

Hi Philip, Please see my submission for the jam @ https://dungeonpop.itch.io/gibbousmoon

I hope you will show mercy and accept this submission - I am based in Sydney Australia and the time difference got the better of me. I should have been watching the moon.

Nick (Dungeon Pop)