this game is actually super super cool but i think the dialogue for the main character needs to be worked out a bit, particularly the line "this mascara just came out 3 days ago!" as someone who is heavily into makeup... thats not how that works. it took me out of it a bit, also the walking and running anims need to be tweaked and needs camera work. otherwise pretty awesome. as a vain self obsessed girl who actually talks like that if you need consultation with the dialogue lmk, also i realize it's supposed to be campy but it just needs to be a bit more clever with it imo. sounds like im hating a bit too much but its only because this game is so up my alley id love to see it fully fleshed out
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