Why did you changed it though and decided to not separate actual thoughts from the dialogues?
Also - in some places you write if the character speaks or not. For example, something like "you tell her that ..." That one is totally fine.
My point is - it is inconsistent, and sometimes it is in this way, and sometimes it is not.
Hello! Is it possible to have some setting for 1st and 3rd person lines in the dialogues? This became sort of a turn off for me, because it is really confusing to read. Character's spoken words and inner-thought lines are not separated in an way. IMO, ideal was somewhere back, where it was proper 1st person. But at least something like "you say that you are not stranger to danger" instead of "you are not stranger to danger" would be great. And if we could have an option to choose from 1st (like before) to 3rd person variations - would be ideal.
