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lots of choices and hidden variables that unlock different endings, makes me want to keep replaying to get all of them, unfortunately i couldn't get ending one lol, i really like how open it is, not in terms of its them but embracing the poetry of the theme

really good presentation aesthetically! love the crumpled paper look it adds so much charm and i love the concept since it is, obviously, very relatable. it lacks a lot of choice and replay ability though

love the inventory, and the art, there's a lot of thought put into the lore and interesting dialogue as well as the choices, mybe experiment with more than two choices? but other than that im really impressed with what you put together!

Straight to the point with witty writing, maybe just break up your passages into separate paragraphs but everything else works well

really fun idea! lots of options for replayability. Great groundwork for a dnd style game, some of the choices leave me a little confused? but everything else is great