The itch app showed 2 updates. One for S1 final and one for S2. I downloaded the final. Do I have to go back and download the other as well? It wants to do them as separate installs.
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This was actually quite good for being so short at the moment. The English translation was good. I didn't seem to come across any errors on my play through. The use of AI was appropriate and not overbearing like some people tend to do in other AVN's. So far this AVN shows promise and that the creator cares about their project unlike some I have gone through. If I could afford to be a patreon subscriber, this is one I would honestly help support. Hoping for another free release so I can see how things evolve.
Going to give this a shot even though I see varying animation styles. I dislike when animation changes. But should I enjoy this, I will give a positive review once finished. I give honest and trustworthy reviews. (no fluff and no bias)
Edit: Unfortunately starting up the game caused my PC to crash twice and when it didn't the game was Not Responding.
Art is great but my personal opinion is the MC needs work. He has hips like a woman, the girls shoulders are broader than his, and they treat him like a slave most of the time in how they talk to him. I wanted to play a good AVN not a bitch boy simulator. Also, a bit too heavy on the foot fetish. Again, just my opinion. Everyone is entitled to have one, not all opinions are great, and I am aware not everyone is going to agree with mine.
Well, I WAS enjoying the game right up until the MC died, and then the language went from English to something else and caused a disconnect from the story for me. Being immersed in the story is one of the big things for me, as story matters to me as much as the rest of what comes in an AVN. So I had to stop. If I don't know what is being said, I just can't continue on. It was looking good until then.
I can't update the game. I get this...
An error occurred during installation htfs.Open (initial request): in conn.Connect non-retriable error: in conn.tryConnect, got HTTP non-2XX: api.itch.io: HTTP 400: {"errors":{"invalid upload"|}
200 hours into the game. Would hate to lose all that and have to start completely fresh. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
So, I took a break from playing to review and give my thoughts on the game. It is an intriguing storyline but still feels a little unpolished. I fought past the beginning of the game to get to the better art and renders, but they too still need polishing. Animation loops need to be closed better to prevent the animations from having a jump after running their course and starting again, but that is a timing issue from where the loop is connected. Easy fix. Some shine needs to be taken off the girls because it is making them look like they are made of plastic or sweating constantly. The main character needs an artistic redo, because any time you see his abs/legs/feet he looks roughly drawn and lumpy. Positioning is also something to take into consideration as I have just done the scene with Katie at the picnic and the MC's body was slanted awkwardly. You have a promising product here and I would like to see it become something great. I hope this review has helped you in some way, even if it is the tiniest amount. Keep up the good work. I expect big things from you in the future.
Just to help out a bit on correcting a term I caught. I had to pause the game to come tell you before I forget. You use the term "Technophobe" for the main characters mom. Technophobes are afraid of technology. The term you want for her is "tech illiterate", meaning she has trouble using or understanding technical devices. Good luck on the rest of the game.
Glad to see I am not alone in my thoughts. I know it can come across harsh, but as I only review AVN's I believe to have promise, I refuse to lie to the creators. They get my semi filtered thoughts. I refuse to ever tell a creator their game is trash. Those are the games I simply do not review after trying. But creators like this show promise, so I give my honest review on the game and wish them the best on where they take their creation.
I enjoyed the character art style/body proportions (except the overly humongous dick of the MC. I mean seriously?) at the start of the game, but then it seems the character art style just up and changes. And not for the better in my opinion. Someone generally small and petite just gets a huge ol' ass out of nowhere? And faces go from anime to "westernized" anime all of a sudden? Say what you want, but I am a fan of consistency. Speaking of which... The characters have personality changes more than I do, and I have a personality disorder! It has promise, but maybe pick a path and don't jump onto another one after starting down it.
Honest Review.
Went through this in a week and I can say this. Great writing, great visuals, and the intrigue is better than the sex scenes. And the sex is pretty damn good! That says a lot from me when I feel that 90% of VNs nowadays seem solely focused on being petty fap material. I am completely locked in on this story and cannot wait for there to be more. The only issue I had at all with this is one or two words missing from sentences and the fact that every elbow and knee looked like it belonged to someone who needs serious lotion. Lol. Keep up the fantastic work!
Playing this leaves my wondering a few things...
Why is the MC so filthy and unlikable?
Why is dick is always dirty and nasty? BATHE!
Why does his attitude towards women in general suck? Even in the most delicate of times (like his life is on the line) he is a degenerate and thinks with his dick!
Why is he made out to have an infection or STD? If semen smells or tastes fishy, it is time to see a doctor!
Honestly if it weren't for where the storyline is going in the intriguing parts, all I would want to do is beat the MC's ass!