Maybe it's better in spanish? I like the game but the protag, yeesh. That's a lot of outbursts, around 3 or more if I remember. Quite a lot even for me. It's truly well drawn, but the writing does seem a bit flaky, long descriptions of characters, like the teacher being a model but it's not really useful to the story.. (Might be later tho). Seems like a lot of attributes, the teacher doesn't even seem to have a day off? Seems there isn't a reason for the character's actions explained like the bully, David. (Perhaps later tho). They should hire or get a fan to do the english translation, there's a bunch of grammar mistakes. I do like this game, but it'd be lying if I didn't give it an honest opinion or advice for what feels off.
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I'm so incredibly obsessed. I love absolutely EVERYTHING about it. tho, i could have a little help the saving works after 500 clicks or several minutes. I just figured out the saves only do beginning of the hour. Really wish it was the moment i saved. Plus when my failed attempts follow suit It skips the chat as if I clicked.. I really wish I were joking, I spam save every two chat plz help. I'd be so upset to lose my progress over such a masterpiece. :,O Enough of the critique I am so sad I finished it I want the continuation god it's so good. I love these characters so much
I like it so far, character's stories are well drawn out and not just focused solely on appearence, the bg and visuals are very appealing, love it. But.. how the mc just forgets he doesn't care if they wants him or not? implying he'll get her whether she likes it or not?? I mean maybe it's for dubcon people but idk man. Perharps it's just me but I'd be at least a little scared of that guy, already a red flag in my book for saying that. Seems like he meant it. but both are soo... The misogyny might have got to me lol. Anyways besides that awesome game. 10/10, would play again.